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Chapter 1214 - Wine Bottle of Beer

🕑 Added 2025-09-23 11:10:17 +0000 UTC

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Alexander C Hyde

“What, record it to bully me in the future?” (Jake) asked jokingly, having definitely not read the mood right.

Chloe

Tyftc

Michael Click

❤️❤️❤️

Jacob Kraus

I think this sentence is missing a word here "Still had time and wouldn’t rush it." Might make more sense if it was: "Still, He had plenty of time and wouldn't rush it." Or "He still had time and wouldn't rush it."

Jacob Kraus

“Yeah, that’s another point of criticism that I didn’t really see the need to include, seeing as it was your first time. You spent way too much prep time, but again, if you decided to teach more regularly, you would inevitably get more efficient,” Change to “Yeah, that’s another point of criticism that I didn’t really see the need to include, seeing as it was your first time. You spent way too much time prepping; but again, if you decided to teach more regularly, you would inevitably get more efficient,”

Lo-Fi

"give it to be straight" -> "give it to me straight"

FleetfootedFleer

"The Pantheon of Life didn’t notice they had spies among them" I didn't even noticed that, and I read the damn book

LemonPerson

Such an important character that has so many question marks surrounding them. Drives me a little insane😂

Hellion23

Wine bottles of beer -> Villy's motivational warning.

Nate

"wine bottles of beer" to "chugging divine 40s"

Trumangolorian

Like Villy wouldn't be able to come through for Jake. Morally justified hunt of a true dragon. Even the Court of shadows wouldn't attempt that lolol. Can't wait. Tyftc.

Mikesch

I was wondering. According Villies words, he would not have bothered with our Master dunce - the exquisite Duskleave himselfe, except he was indeed a child when taken in (possilble as he was described earlier as very young back than, but who knows in the multiverse), or very special circumstances. I can not wait to learn more about Duskleave

JW Saxby

Tyftc! 🍻

Clint

Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to the B grade evolution! Moral quarrels —> moral qualms?

Paulo Furlaneto

I'm new at english, what would be loled?

Nano

I really want him to take chalette as a student her being a beastkin play well into Jake path with him being beast like

Jeffrey Pearson

Legacy of the first Sage being "observing all the loopholes in the system with an ultra high perception and devious bloodline?" Maybe.... would be fun but will be fun either way.

TNT

I think that’s proper informal language. Not worth correcting. It is not technically correct use of English but fine for dialogue.

Nathaniel France

Honestly I hope we see Jake do lessons here and there as side notes, where he doesn’t completely abandon the non-geniuses as a big thing of humanity is each generation lifting the next higher. It would thematically fit if Jake embodied that in his lessons, not by coddling, but pushing them harder in ways that would help them rather then ignore them entirely.

Cody

“So, you've noticed anyone suspicious yet? I didn’t see anything off on my end or had any weird feelings from anyone during the lesson, but I’m also fully aware that my nerves were tense and I wasn’t exactly paying attention,” Jake said. So you’ve noticed -> So have you noticed Thanks for the chapter Zog!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Jason Hardman

TYFTC! Think this phrasing is a typo: give it to be straight -> give it to me straight Could use a title like "Straight talk" if it's not been done before.

Alexandre8901

Thanks for the chapter!

Dragon

Do you guys think that meditation will be his transcendent skill, It could also be that his transcendence will be the entire legacy of the first sage. Or something else entirely. just a thought

Mateo Lopez

False wine and True Dragons What about this spin on your idea?

Zayn Bakir

Hmm well if we have to wait for a dragon how about that demon wedding ark since he was invited or is that going to be a later one?

Charles Ryan

Wining for parts?

Siethrobo

We don't even know if there's something between mythic and divine

Brandon Stephens

99 wine bottles of beer on the wall. It even rolls off the tongue still.

Stephen

What? **shocked Pikachu** Don't you know saying that makes you a racist?

Jeryd Greer

This is good.

Jeryd Greer

Chapter title suggestion: Adjusting Expectation

Cmndprmpt

Title: Wine Beer and Dragons. This chapter is actually pretty hard to come up with a witty title for.

Ni

Was really expecting Jake to go" oh and I didn't even see eversmile this time" Good chapter

Tenrog

Title: No Child Left Behind?

brjenness

i'm looking forward to the wonder event and shiny elf shenanigans.

Daniel

Title suggestion: Peer Review

Shadowind

Tftc

Sergej Fel

If you think about it, the "No Child Left Behind" and similar initiatives IRL did more damage to ALL kids, than they ever had the potential to help the stupid or criminal ones... Yes, they sound warm and fuzzy, but in reality those were very damaging

The Dregs

“You don’t need to try to convince me; I was already going to do it.” I literally loled at this… in the middle of my office at work.

R

Im not gonna wine about it, its beerter than nothing.

Koof Tron

Looking forward to an Epic 20 chapter dragon fight!

brjenness

I like the idea of the system being a vaccine created by the beings from a higher plane of existence and Jake being something random that grew in a forgotten petri dish.

Raymond Lenihan

Suggested title: Best Teaching Practices

brjenness

u know what's bassackwards? it is known that geniuses almost always fail to make it to godhood. Gods frequently come from the stubborn who refuse to quit and stick to their path. so what do most major factions do? they focus their resources and training on the gifted. along comes Jake with his ability to strengthen records and armed with both a willingness to fafo and stubborn self confidence. will he be a catalyst to change greatly improving the chances of the less gifted producing far more candidates and better suited candidates for godhood.? the developers of the system sure hope so because the great battle is approaching and the multiverse created to defend them is not strong enough.

tigerfishie

TYFTC… I really hope the cover of this book will be him and the dragon ngl

ABTelford

Very enjoyable chapter. Good conversation. 🙂. And a chpt title idea: a good conversation. Or: evaluations and plans

Daniel

Dragon, Dragon, Dragon,

John Durrett

Tyftc

Nate

With how much effort to upgrade it and it being based on First Sage text, his 'Meditate' skill better be more than Mythical. To deal with healing the soul at C grade, That skill better reach Divine.

Zogarth

I edited it. It was specifically meant to refer to parts of slain dragons.

Ben Sheahan

He was a c grade dragonkin wasnt he?

Jan Backhaus

Just yesterday i was wondering (in my head) if that yip snack-time already happened or not

Sean Napier

Didn’t you say dragons parts were easy to buy because dragons would sell their body parts themselves? I though you said the during the pantheon of life arc?

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter!

C0bra$

Thank u for the chapter

Stephen Crisel

there is a one armed dragon from the azure-flight that might be a good target. as long as he is currently b grade..... he already already fafo once and embarrassed the flight.

RnR_ RnR

Doesn't he have to wait till the soulflame is done baking?

RnR_ RnR

I laughed so hard at this. And why is the creature doing the horns very Asian. Like "honeeeyyyy dis why you have no boyfren!"

RnR_ RnR

I mean... when you lock down a godqueen of a similar path... what is a succubus to that?

David

God I can't wait to see what B grade brings. It's likely a year or more (irl time) away though so I'm trying not to get too hyped. I'm looking forward to finding out what kind of "special" human Jake is and what he gets out of it.

William Rossi

Has Jake forgotten about irin?

Staudi

Tyftc

dash w

Thanks for the chappy

A Flashy BR

Tyftc!!

Meir Banon

Tftc

Sylphie

REE

Nexas Aurelias

I think hes banking in his meditation upgrade fixing that since either skj ds like hes going for a mythical meditation skill which would be the most broken skill he will have til godhood imo.

Mike

So I'm not sure if anyone has brought it up recently but Jake does have one more thing to do after fixing pallet of the Malefic viper. Absorb a part of yip of yore under Villys supervision. We have just been waiting for the skill fix but that will most likely come before B grade. Others have mentioned the soul flame but I don't know if we need that before B grade. Very excited with the developments recently. We had our sneak peaks of all the top contenders in his universe for the world wonder, and we got our next major big bad set up in an elusive god faction. I think Villy fishing for leads show he is kind of desperate, he has made a friend and he will be damned if he loses him in a similar way to how he lost his family. But they are hiding so well he is grasping for leads. Now I think the teaching was also just generally good for Jake but the fact that the viper has to reach like this for leads and it's pointed out that he is reaching shows a lot.

Corvid

Some poor dragon is just going to be at the dragon salon getting their horns done and catch an Event Horizon to the face.

Eli Evagud

Skeptical, I would say

Hayden Leech

He’s focusing on the dragon hunt over fixing his soul? Priorities dude!

Devillelouch

There was already Elder Whisper in the PoL. Malfoy would be a problem because the Order is already viewed as an evil snake cult and having too many villains could drift the viewer to seeing the order as not just "flirting with evil" but actually being evil.

Eli Evagud

This should be the title "Threaten with a good time"

Devillelouch

To add on: It feels like too much subversion of expectation in too short of a time. Jasper and the Bow being the other two recent ones. Even just a simple "Shadowy figure or group of people saying "Jake is fine, so he can even resist void gods" or something similar" would have prevented the let down feeling. The teaching arc also would have been good in any post action arc as filler. In a building tension arc it just is too comfy. It reminds me of the Hive Dive where I think it was average fight arc but it was just sandwich between great building tension arcs. The final floor fight also suffers from this, and that was a better and more impactful fight. That fight being in a waiting for payoff section. Or for a non-fight version, the learning the improved shroud arc. Which is generally a good section but just sandwiched between better sections.

Leviathan

I don't know why this popped in my head, but does anyone else think that a character like Lucious Malfoy would be a great Easter egg character in the order of the malefic viper

Kevin the Composer

Just throwing out "Merlot Lite" as a title. Kind of a word play off of the brand Miller Lite

IntenseSushi

Tftc

KenTX325

When will Jake use the soul flame cradle? Before or after B grade? I guess he will wait till B grade to go back to the loot tower to upgrade gloves? How are Deana Myra and Artemis doing? A lot of stuff to do at order before B grade.

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter

Kyle Davis

Title “Beer N’ Dragons”

Yiskah

He expects him to kill a god at S-grade. An A-grade at B-grade. And an S-grade at A-grade.

Allformsoflight

Chapter title suggestion. "Unwineding after a long day"

Devillelouch

I am confuzzled. The chapter order is slow rolling a bit too hard. If Vendoli or Chalette are the spies or will come back than hint at that. This kind of "the protagonists don't know" chapter makes sense after the reveal not before it. It is very jarring for the reader, because it feels like "these were filler chapters". The hook was already revealed in the void. Maybe the reveal is getting reworked, causing this ordering but I would swap the ordering for general release. It may work in the audiobook but in a reading format it really doesn't imo. Hopefully the reveal is soon because the teaching mini arc feels bad at this point, it is missing payoff.

Tyran

What about 'Drinking Plans' for the title?

Beemoss

Tftc

Andy Swearingen

Do y'all think Jake will get a transendant level meditation skill or just let us see what lies beyond mythic?

Stormy

Oh I feel the cliffhanger on Friday coming

BumAssBumAss

Honestly, with the palate getting fixed soon, I'm hoping that Jake can include desolation as another poison he can use in this fight against true dragons. Even without making the poison itself, Jake should be able to do it. Palate of the Malefic Viper that absorbed the records and poison from the desolate core. Sagacity of the Malefic Viper to give Jake insight as to how to use it. Blood of the Malefic Viper to concentrate the desolation in his blood integrated by palate. Fangs of Man to store it. Fangs of the Malefic Viper to unleash it. Jake has all the tools to use desolation already.

Xander

TFTC :) Theres gotta be a "hold my beer" joke in there somewhere since Jakes drinking and talking about going off to do something reckless, right? Suggested edits: "Fine… give it to *be* straight. " should be "me" "trying to pick *them* up and carry *others*, " either "them" is an extra word or it should be "them" at the end "“What, record it to bully me in the future?” ** asked jokingly, " missing "Jake" here? "So, *you've* noticed anyone suspicious yet" should be "you" "on my end or *had* any weird" from context should be "have" "fan of *just* attacking some random dragon *just* out shopping " repetition. Ditch either "dragon belongs to will be happy you killed *it* for them, " extra word "would be *kind* of awesome,” Jake said, having *kind* of forgotten to bring" repetition "Still had time and wouldn’t rush it." something missing here "and *success* coming in short *succession*." repetitive. Suggest changing "succession" to "order"

brjenness

So Help Me Villy for the title. Secretly chuckle because everyone will assume it's because villy gave feedback and offered to find a dragon, but it's actually the end of "The truth and nothing but the truth. So help me villy."

RnR_ RnR

I dont think a title will come up. Dragons are tough but still mortal. Killing a really hard enemy is one thing, but killing something that is supposed to live forever is something else.

Crysus

How about “Setting Expectations” as a title?

NicN

Tftc

Ryan Linus

Title: People Parts

RnR_ RnR

Just some random dragon on the phone (token) with his wife who is yelling at him for not grabbing the right ingredients and suddenly gets smoked by an arcane powershot.

Tanner Matone

Alco-heresy

Dhia

i would say that the title should be how to hunt your dragon or make that the title of the chapter that he does the dragon hunting in question

Benjamin Davis-Lorton

I kind of thought that would be the Viper's take on his lesson, seei g as he based his approach on old Earth teaching styles

RnR_ RnR

Teacher performance review

Jana

„You did a decent job for a Guest Teacher - now for your reward: Murder!“ Love it :-)

Ben Cox

Tyftc

RnR_ RnR

Yes!!!! A hunting we will go! And then B GRADE BABY!!! Does villy expect jake to kill a god at s grade? Also, are jakes skills leveled up enough to not lose too many levels after evolution?

Sammot

So we know that there is a title for a escaping a god trying to kill you (from that guy that bragged about it who got killed early on by villy) so I always assumed there would be one for a mortal killing a god too. And since killing a true dragon at c grade is at the same level as killing a god as a mortal will he gain a title for it?

Derek Raw

100% Jake should merc at dragon outside of the grocery store just minding it's own business.

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

From what I remember those were things like nail clippings

Matthias

tftc

Abdulaziz ALRumaih

Don’t threaten Jake with a good time

Georgia Guy-Williams

How about something like Wine of a taught time For a chapter name. I'm sure someone else has a better idea

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Calum

Might be reading this wrong, but isn’t this chapter conflicting with what was said earlier about dragon parts? This implies they don’t like to sell there body parts, where an earlier chapter said something along the lines of - they knew how overpowered they were as a species and sold off their parts for a load of money - or something like that

Rewdan

I love this title

ShadeDweller9578

Love the title even if it doesn’t really reflect the chapter

Kirin

Thanks for the chapter!

BlackRazaras

Pokemon ORAS 2v2 Shiny Cagelocke

GeneralBlack

What do you mean couldn't get a good title it's magnificent!

Christopher cashen

Honestly I like it lol

Sogala

Thanks for the chapter

Ed Soto

Tftc

Devillelouch

Tyfc

Connor

Thanks for the chapter


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