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Chapter 1231 - Stalking One's Prey
🕑 Added 2025-10-16 11:03:21 +0000 UTCJake watched from the other side of the large city as the True Dragon stayed at the table for a few moments before deciding to leave. He wondered if she planned on looking for him, but she just went to her room in the resort. Despite her frown, she seemed entirely unaffected by their interaction.
One could say that approaching her directly like this had been a risky strategy, but Jake was fairly confident in at least escaping if it came to that. Luckily, all he’d needed was a few uses of One Step and Unseen Hunter to slip away, definitely in part due to her not actively looking that hard for him.
Still, he believed it was worth the risk for a variety of reasons. First of all, despite Villy’s wonderful slideshow, he wanted to confirm for himself what kind of person she was. He had purposefully been a little annoying, and her response of trying to kill him was all the evidence he needed that she was indeed a shitty person.
Secondly, this brief encounter allowed Jake to get a better feel for how powerful she was. Despite hiding her power, Yrelstromoz couldn’t entirely hide from Jake, and after experiencing her presence, there was no doubt in his mind.
She was by far the most powerful prey he’d ever planned to hunt down.
Sure, she wasn’t a fighter with a lot of life-and-death experience. Sure, she was on the younger side for B-grades. Sure, she was considered to be of low talent. However, she was still a True Dragon, through and through. Her one attempt to kill him had truly confirmed that.
Jake’s danger sense had screamed at him to dodge when it was unleashed, and while he wasn’t sure the blow would have been powerful enough to trigger Moment of the Primal Hunter, he didn’t believe it was far off. Being able to display such power while still in her humanoid form and with a lot of the skill’s Records focused on keeping it subtle, her sheer magical prowess was unquestionable. Truly, it was as one could expect of a dragon.
The third and final reason Jake wanted to meet her in person was to begin his hunt and inform her that he was coming for her. He wanted her to be aware that he planned on slaying her and not just attacking from out of nowhere, yet at the same time, he didn’t want to attack her with an open declaration, as that would just make him foolishly lose his powerful opening attack.
Besides, Jake was fairly confident that his opening attack wouldn’t prove as effective as he hoped, so he preferred not to put too many eggs in that basket. Chances were that Yrelstromoz had some kind of life-saving measure that could mostly counteract Jake’s initial strike at least somewhat. From what little research Jake did during his final preparation phase – he kept it light on purpose – the dragons most focused on magic tended to always have at least one life-saving skill to avoid assassination attempts.
The Lumenflight consisted of dragons that were masters of magic among a race of masters. Variants from the Emberflight, Darkflight, and several others were more mixed and also possessed extreme physical might, while the Lumenflight was more in the pure magic department. Due to this, Jake definitely believed she would have something.
During Jake’s final preparation phase, he’d also crafted everything he believed he would need for this hunt. He had stocked up on more Dragonsbane Poison than he believed he would ever need, and he had a healthy stock of potions of all variants, all newly crafted to make use of his higher stats from the Sacred Prodigy title.
Now that he was sitting a few hundred kilometers away while keeping an eye on Yrelstromoz, he was preparing himself for the fight to come. However, now wasn’t the time, and he wanted to keep watching a little longer. He wanted to see if he could learn anything more useful, but also because of one of his skills. Namely, Relentless Hunt, which allowed him to slowly start building Hunting Momentum even now, as per the skill description:
“Allows the Arcane Hunter of Horizon’s Edge to accumulate momentum during a hunt by slowly finding an opportunity to strike.”
He also saw that his brief interaction with her had kick-started the skill’s activation, and while it was far slower to build than during actual fights, it was respectable and would add a noticeable increase to his opening attack.
Another reason he waited was to test her innate resistance to negative magical effects. As he departed, Jake placed a Hunter’s Mark on Yrelstromoz, which both confirmed to him that he could indeed mark a True Dragon without them noticing, and it would also let him know how resistant she was to such effects based on how long it would take to expire.
A final reason he was a bit reluctant to get the hunt started right away was the location. While Yrelstromoz and Villy didn’t seem to mind destroying entire population centers as collateral damage, Jake would like to avoid it if possible. He simply saw no reason why his hunt should also result in the deaths of so many people who had nothing to do with it. Especially in a place like this, made for people who were just trying to have a good time.
He had a solution in mind that he theory-crafted as he waited for the Mark to expire. As he did so, Jake also reflected on the information about Yrelstromoz and their recent conversation. From those two things alone, he had a good understanding of what kind of person the True Dragon was.
She was someone born with a golden spoon, but just as many expectations were placed upon her. When she realized she couldn’t live up to these expectations, instead of continuing to try or adapt, she began to build resentment towards everyone and everything around her. She started lashing out at the world and reveling in her own innate superiority as a True Dragon, never caring about anyone but herself.
If she were just a dragon who decided that the Path of constantly trying to grow stronger wasn’t for her and just settled down to live a quiet life, Jake wouldn’t have cared. He would have seen her choice as moronic and judged her for having made it, but he wouldn’t have bothered her.
However, she just had to go and be a multiversal terrorist who could experience moments of feeling powerful when bullying the weak. She was so self-centered that she couldn’t accept anyone doing better than her earlier, something their brief interaction had confirmed. Yrelstromoz hadn’t even tried to hide how much she was seething as Jake kept winning during the card game. The only reason she hadn’t openly lashed out or done anything earlier was that she’d already decided she was going to kill Jake within a couple of minutes of him sitting down.
There was a small risk that her lashing out would have resulted in an attack, resulting in collateral damage, but Jake believed she wouldn’t do that. Not because he thought she cared about the people present, but because openly attacking would mean her time at the holiday resort would end, forcing her to move on to her next location. Also, she was meant to be lying low, and while hiding a few subtle assassinations wouldn’t be too hard, widespread destruction was quite noticeable, and it was also far easier to figure out what kind of magic was used.
As Jake was having these thoughts, his eyes opened wide upon feeling his Hunter’s Mark expire. Right as it happened, Jake felt a slight sense of danger, making him sit completely motionless and focus even more on his Unseen Hunter to stay entirely hidden.
This proved a wise choice, as a fraction of a second later, an invisible pulse of power passed over him and the barrier of stable arcane mana he used to better hide himself. He was tense for a few moments as several more pulses appeared, and then he saw Yrelstromoz frown and shake her head.
Upon seeing this, Jake finally relaxed and let out a sigh of relief as he also couldn’t help but smile. She’d noticed his Hunter’s Mark expire. Jake couldn’t remember that happening before, which was why he couldn’t help but smile. Had he been a little scared that this wouldn’t prove a good hunt before he got to the planet, seeing as he was fighting a True Dragon not exactly atop the totem pole? Yes, but by now, he knew it wouldn’t be easy. Again, a True Dragon was still a True Dragon and an apex creature of the multiverse for a reason.
Jake continued to observe her for a while longer, not wanting to attack too soon after revealing himself, while also hoping she would give him a chance to strike when she was not close to others.
It sucked that he didn’t have any Void Sphere, but sadly, they weren’t that easily acquired. Learning to drag people into the Shadow Realm would also have been useful, but alas.
About a day passed with him just watching her as Yrelstromoz stayed in her room throughout, never going anywhere or doing anything. Fortunately, she soon got bored enough to try to venture outside, going down to the pool area where she got a single drink at the bar before returning to her room.
The next day, she did something similar but stayed outside for a little longer. On the third day, her caution seemed almost entirely gone as she seemingly went about business as usual. The only difference was that she didn’t kill anyone or do anything to stand out, but acted like a relatively normal person. If she acted like this all the time, Jake would never have come, but now that he had seen her true face, she was only prey.
Was there perhaps a path to redemption somewhere? Could she be reformed and turn a new leaf? Perhaps… unluckily for her, it was Jake and not Jacob who was coming for her, and the hunter had no interest in offering an opportunity to repent. The only repentance she would find was in death. That, or she would kill him, and honestly, killing Jake was bound to give some hefty Records even for a newly evolved B-grade, so in theory, that could help her turn her life around. Sadly for her, Jake was intent on this only remaining a theory.
Another day passed with Jake observing her, considering how he wanted to attack. Yrelstromoz stayed cautious, and he did spot her throw glances over her shoulder here and there, naturally never spotting a Jake who used his Pulse of Perception from over a hundred kilometers away.
He released constant pulses, getting a snapshot every second or so to keep track of her. On that note, Jake felt pretty confident in soon being able to expand his sphere for constant observation with a far longer range, but he didn’t want to try to push it before B-grade. Besides, it got the job done.
Back to his hunt, Jake considered ways to make her leave the city. One of the good things about this planet was how deserted it was. Yrelstromoz had definitely chosen it because the only people who ever went there were those wanting to enjoy a pleasant holiday.
The planet only had one ocean, which might as well have been a great lake, as it wasn’t even that big in the first place. Along the coastline of this ocean were countless large establishments and entire holiday cities, interspersed with the greenery and beautiful vistas created by the lake and the energy it gave off.
Any other place than this one coastline on the entire planet was either pure wilderness or vast swaths of nothingness. It was mostly just rock, metals, and sand, with little life there. Since nearly all the planet’s energy was focused in and around the ocean, there wasn’t even anything valuable to be found outside the city.
In Jake’s ideal world, he would lead her to these outskirts and fight far away from any population center, but the problem remained of how he was going to make that happen. He needed something to bait her away, but he didn’t know what.
As Jake was sitting in contemplation, a certain snake god, who was watching curiously, couldn’t help himself anymore: “Are you really that against just attacking when a good opportunity presents itself? Would it really be that horrible for a few E and D-grades to die? Because I can tell you that no one whose opinion matters in the multiverse would find it a problem.”
“I feel like you’re purposefully just trying to bait me right now due to our recent conversation,” Jake muttered as he kept watch of Yrelstromoz to keep his accumulation of Hunting Momentum going.
“Alright, fine, just saying, when you attacked the Usurper of Yip, you were a lot more willing to kill everyone on his planet,” the Viper said.
“Different circumstances. I viewed them as effectively being afflicted with an incurable plague,” Jake shot back.
“So are these people. The plague of uselessness and contentment.”
“Lucky for them, that’s not incurable nor something I feel makes them worthy of death,” Jake said. “Now, did you just want to try to convince me to destroy a holiday resort, or did you have anything useful to add?”
“Not in particular, though I guess I could be wondering out loud why you aren’t using one of the most obvious methods imaginable to bait her out of the city and into the wilderness,” the snake god said casually.
“… alright, I’m listening,” Jake responded.
“Just telling you would be boring, so I’ll just give you a tiny little hint: check your fucking spatial storage for once in your life.”
Jake was about to say something in response to the Viper’s impatient words, but the Primordial had already cut the telepathic connection by the time he had the chance to. He ended up sitting there for a moment before checking out his inventory and… yeah, alright, Jake should really consider what he was carrying around sometimes. This wasn’t even an example of some old forgotten item in his inventory, but the things he had been using most recently.
Yeah… alright, this should work.
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Yrelstromoz couldn’t help but still have an uneasy feeling despite a week passing since her odd encounter with the human who avoided her attack. His ominous words as he left still annoyed her, even if, realistically, they shouldn’t.
It hadn’t helped when she faintly felt some magical tracker of some sort lose effect on her the same day they met, as the notion of her being unable to sense when it had been applied was unsettling to say the least.
However, the more she thought about it, the more she questioned her need for fear. Logically, she didn’t actually believe there was any credible threat after thoroughly considering everything.
The person who approached her gave off the unmistakable aura of a C-grade. She did now believe he had hidden his actual level, but hiding grade and level were two very different things, especially when one used energy, which he had while dodging.
Only those far stronger than herself could disguise themselves as C-grades and evade her detecting it, but that wouldn’t make any sense. No A-grade or B-grade of a high level would come for her, as that went against the norms of the multiverse. No, if the United Tribes wanted to get revenge for her killing a dog, they would have to send a bunch of new B-grades or face criticism.
That meant Yrelstromoz saw only two options. Either it had indeed been an A-grade or someone else far more powerful than herself, in which case he had likely just done all that to mess with her, perhaps as some kind of psychological attack. That… or it had indeed been a peak C-grade who was incredibly powerful for his level and managed to avoid her killing attack.
Ultimately, both options meant the same thing: there was no credible threat. Again, no A-grade or too powerful person would dare kill her, and in case it was a C-grade, she found the sentiment of a C-grade even trying to kill her laughable.
Hence, she returned to enjoying herself, remaining a bit more cautious in case she was under observation. At least she remained cautious until that day when she was relaxing at the pool and she sensed something.
At first, she questioned her own perception, but when the feeling persisted, she quickly reacted by sitting up and expanding her senses. Far away, there was something familiar… something draconic in nature.
Frowning, Yrelstromoz hesitated, finding this all too suspicious. Why would she suddenly feel what she believed was another dragon on this planet? It was naturally related to the human from only a week prior, but that only made matters more confusing.
She didn’t believe a dragon had come to kill her. Dragons didn’t usually kill dragons, after all. However, that just made matters even more confusing. Clearly, whatever it was tried to bait her there.
Could it be an attempt to ambush me? Yrelstromoz wondered for a second before quickly dispelling that thought. If they wished to attack her, she’d given them an entire week of her doing nothing. The thought that any would-be attempted killer would even consider potential collateral damage didn’t even cross her mind.
After thinking on the matter a while longer, her curiosity won as Yrelstromoz decided to investigate why she felt the presence of another dragon. She went fully aware that someone might be plotting against her, but even if that was the case, did she really need to be that concerned?
She was a True Dragon, after all.
Comments
Maou Razonica
A truly dead dragon, yes.
Chloe
Tyftc
Greg Alverson
I wondered this myself since she already broke that rule which is why she was banished. I get that if an A grade came and squashed her it might escalate to a S grade dragon killing them then a god killing said dragon etc etc so that is to be avoided. Isnt them banishing her for killing lower grades bacily saying we wont retaliate if you take her out. The whole killing lower grades thing also only seems to be an issue sometimes as the vipers and other do it all the time as collateral damage and it seems ok then. What if there was a divinely blessed person at the resort and jake attacked dragon and they got killed as collateral in the fight as a lower tier. It just does not seem to make sense or have set rules
Rachel Clements
TYFTC! She's so oblivious. Happy to squish those weaker than her, but certain no one stronger than her will squish her? For...reasons?
Wren Redwood
Why does Yrel think the United Tribes wouldn’t send someone higher grade to take her out? She killed a C grade as a B grade, wouldn’t that warrant retaliation in a similar vein? Is her belief based in reality, or is she just really conceited and warped by her worldview of believing it’s chill for her to act like that?
Dani Sarah Sperry
I kinda like running jokes like this one. And it shows no matter how powerful he gets he can be forgetful especially about stuff. Also other litrpg series I’ve read there will be a summary of inventory as well as stats. Zog doesn’t do that which emphasizes it’s not a big deal to Jake. At this point i have absolutely no idea how much stuff he’s got stored away either. 😂
Sinful Cyanide
I'm so tired of the inventory joke, it was humorous at first, but it's worn out it's welcome at this point
Kurai Kami Sedrick
Zog is doing a good job of making me hate this bitch lol. The arrogance is beyond irritating, true dragon or not.
Levi Lowry
Not gonna lie the hypocrisy from Jake is crazy. I get him wanting to hunt her or others because he doesn’t agree with things they do but he turns it into a fucking moral argument every time so he doesn’t feel as bad about it. It’s like he forgot when Villy said that everyone is a villain to someone, like when Jake almost wiped out those monkeys and got his time musa.
brjenness
Event horizon is a new type of skill. Jake received a skill token that is kept in his inventory that must be taken out to activate it.
Tristan Lewis
Is there a possibility Jake will reach peak c grade next week??
Prospects
I don’t think it will be as long as the Ellhakan fight, but it will definitely be long.
Prospects
Event horizon is just a augmentation to his archery skill, it makes even casual arrows hit like a truck and ensures they hit. I also think it will help him upgrade skills, but that is pure speculation on my part.
Takoda Heitz
Im calling it now. Event horizons main function in this fight will be to completely counter Yrel’s escape token that she was given so that she cannot escape the grasp of the primal Hunter. (Also Grasp of The Primal Hunter would be a sick name for a skill fusion between touch of the malefic viper and primal gaze in like S grade or sum)
Takoda Heitz
I’m guessing she will but event horizon will allow Jake to still attack her regardless
Takoda Heitz
The steepest of cliffs my friend. This is Zogarth we are talking about. He revels in our impatience. At home slapping his knee and pointing at us. lol
smore
Damn... I hope tomorrow we're not left on a massive cliff hanger!
Hayden Leech
Zogarth ruined weekends. Imagine that!!
Carl Never
Fat squirrel
MrBooniecap
Jake is gonna get a big dragon pelt!!!!
joel southard
Thank you for the chapter
Xerecs
Because Villy essentially called dibs for his chosen and who's going to tell a primordial no?
Alex
Okay, I'm genuinely baffled here: Yrel killed a scion from the United Tribes that was the son of a Demigod and the recipient of a Divine Blessing - meaning that a high-level S Grade and a GOD had a vested interest in the person Yrel killed. Yrel is convinced that she can't be touched for killing the kid because of the multiversal 'rule' that feuds need to be handled by people at the same level. I guess her head is so far up her own arse that she thinks only True Dragons pose a threat at her level, and she doesn't believe the Dragonflights would side with the United Tribes and send someone to kill her. The question I have is: why the fuck hasn't the Demigod avenged their son? Why hasn't the God avenged the kid they blessed? Yrel BROKE THE RULES when she killed a C grade, so those two are well within their rights to kill the shit out of her - ESPECIALLY since the Lumenflight have disavowed Yrel for being a massive piece of shit. I just don't understand why someone hasn't come down on Yrel like the fist of an angry god already.
KenTX325
I’m wondering if he can eat a dragon with the new pallet skill.
Shadowind
Tftc
Joshua Little
Thanks for the chapter.
Ender419
All powerful people who thought they were untouchable were brought down by the most insignificant thing…and this young dragon is no different. I just hope she doesn’t use her life saving token from her parents friend in an attempt to save when she is at the end of her rope.
brjenness
dragon parts most likely. I guessed token from Helen, but parts make more sense.
GeneticSloth
tftc!
Cody
Uhhhhh did Jake get this item from the dragonflights? Does anyone have any theories on what it could be….
brjenness
when I evolved i became soft, sneaky, and fast...who am i?
Wen L.
Can't wait to see this fight. dragon girl is asking for it. Wonder if her death will spawn any good loot
Alex
That certainly seems to be the case, but I’m not sure why Yrel would give a shit about Jake showing off his collection of dead dragon bits. She’s made it very clear that she only cares about herself, so I’m not sure why she’d be offended by him having a storage necklace full of dead dragons.
Vega
Jake’s hyperfixation on those gates during that System Event cracked me up. Also his fight-looting during his bouts with those vampires, man turned into a damn loot goblin during that arc. Shit was hilarious
Ronan B
Eh Jake has history of calling it the Void marble & lollipop, moreso than sphere iirc
Vega
I don’t think Jake is the type who plays mind games if he doesn’t need to do so
Jason Davis
Alternate idea for this hunt for if Jake wanted to destroy Yrel's ego before killing her. Apply hunters mark on her a bit after it expires, snipe her with an arrow occasionally (maybe even attach ominous notes to random arrows), bribe those that operate the teleportation platforms to deny her access. Basically show Yrel that even apex species can be weak, can be powerless, can be prey to apex individuals. That even those at the top need others to act as a shield sometimes, and hope she realizes that the lumenflight had been her shield.
Alex
Yeah, unless I missed it he hasn’t used his Event Horizon skill yet — he definitely will during the fight.
Beef Wrench
What happened to Jake's new class skill? Is that in use for this situation? I don't even remember it clearly but, I'm assuming he chose her as a target for it right? I might have missed something though I'm not sure
bioticisbasic
Tyftc
Matthias
tftc
Burkholt
I feel like tomorrow's going to be the start of the fight that's not going to end for 2 weeks. I might have to pause until it's finished. I wonder if I have that kind of self-control.
Burkholt
I don't necessarily feel it's repeating content, but hyping up the fight to come while giving us a bit of space from the gate of enlightenment arc.
Cash Collins
I feel like we might hit it before Christmas
Quantainium C
She killed a influential C grade person with a divine blessing. With her being B grade this is greatly frowned upon. I don't think it's an actual dog race and she is just belittling them.
brjenness
nooooooo...he'll release that tomorrow instead of a chapter. what have you done?
Sergej Fel
Is it me or do the latest chapters feel unneccessary repeating their contents to artificially fill the length?
Andrew Massey
Hey Zogarth! Release the spatial storage list! Seriously I, like Jake, have no idea what he has in there
Scott Conway
I really hope this isn't the C grade golden retriever that evolved on earth right before the Nevermore saga began. Seeing as he was guarding his humans on a farm- I doubt it but it's the only dog we have heard of.
brjenness
major announcement: un resolution banning cliffhangers
Abriel Blauer
If he acted like this all the time --> If she acted like this all the time
InfernoDroid
Can't wait for b grade, I think we might hit it before the end of the year
brjenness
zog's favorite movie is Thelma and louise...because of the ending
Vega
Thanks for the chapter! Suggested edit: Void Marble -> Void Sphere
tigerfishie
TYFTC
brjenness
fight prediction inexperienced yrel goes all out from the beginning. starts to feel fear when the human isn't dying. blows all her resources before realizing she has been poisoned and is not regenerating mana. then event horizon happens.
K R
Im imaging Jake laying out dragon body parts like Halloween decorations in the forest somewhere
Phil Ritter
I mean technically it was somewhat teased back in the tutorial dungeon even tho that was Jake wanting to fight Villy but I guess that’s still a bit further away
Hornbach
"Dread it, run from it, cliffs arrive all the same"
Jayce Sul
Ugh I hate the fact that tomorrow is Friday. Another weekend of imagining and fantasizing the fight in my head only for it to go completely differently...
Koof Tron
Looking forward to the next few weeks of this arrogant dragon's mental state as the fight begins with her utterly confident, then denial, then doubt, then fear!
Lucas
Tftc
Violet
This fight has been talked about for like 100s of chapters, I’m so excited, so excited for b grade too, this will be the first time I’m caught up reading when he gets to a new rank I’m so excited, tftc
Mrburns93
I can already feel the cliff approaching.
BumAssBumAss
Even if event horizon doesn't isolate the target, Jake should work towards it because it is a flaw in Jake's path. To simply use innocent weaklings as shields. If or when event horizon does isolate targets, I don't think it'll be an open domain like ell'hakan's sunrise or a closed one like you see in the anime jjk. In videos describing what it's like to jump into an event horizon, assuming youre intact, the person would look like they are stretched out into a thin infinitly long noodle. I think from the outside perspective the person would look like they are still entering, don't quote me on that. My point is that, Jake's version could infinitly expand space based on perception around him and the target to isolate them. I think it would be cool if that's how it worked.
Rewdan
Don’t worry Jake got this and if things go really bad he can always use his smelly pot.
Rewdan
Thanks Zogarth, we’ve almost reached the start of the fight and I’m so gassed (overly excited) for the battle to begin!
Nate
Just a dragon's heart straight up stapled to a tree with an arrow
Jason Hardman
TYFTC! Got a pronoun reversal here: If he acted like this all the time, Jake would never have come, -> If she
Eric Shivak
TFTC.... As the great fish admiral once said. "That's bait!"
Rewdan
I feel he’ll get that archery skill upgrade he’s be looking for.
Rewdan
And she’s in for one hell of a beat down
Sylphie
Ree!!
Meir Banon
Tftc
Dhia
maybe it’s dragons bane or a heart he still had but didn’t get rid of earlier
DrReverseCallout
I’m ready for “Cliffhanger Friday”. WOOOOOOOO
Fyrtue
Probably some of his dragonbane materials if I were to guess.
Takoda Heitz
Mid battle? Shit they’re barely gonna exchange a conversation. Then we will hear about earth or some shit for the rest of the chapter.
Cory S.
Zog I know you have it in you to make this a multi-part fight and it be a good one. Just know that I have prepared myself for the performance. Don’t edge me too hard.
Cory S.
100% suckage for sure
Ryan McCasland
I would bet Jake is using a dragon heart or some other alchemy ingredient to draw her out
Roy
Thank you for the chapter Zogarth 🙏 Looking forward to the confrontation and those future B grade adventures!
Michael
Zig gonna milk this fight for weeks with this pace lol
Nathan Holliday
Okay is anyone else ready to finally find out what Event Horizon does? I ain’t got a clue but I got a feeling I’m going to lose my mind!
Nathan Holliday
Anyone know what he used to bait her? I have no clue how many different things he has in his spatial storage at this point.
David
In all fairness tho, unless they are in his inner circle, does ANYONE in the multiverse comprehend Jake at all?? Smiley doesn't count!
Tom C
Welp looks like we definitely have a mid-battle cliff tomorrow guys, prepare yourselves now! 😂 TFTC!
Alexandre8901
Tftc! This early and so many comments… I guess were all impatient for the fight to begin!!!
Ben Cox
Another Friday cliffhanger incoming, still I'm excited to seenthe start of the fight tomorrow even if we will have to wait for next week to see it's ending. Tyftc
Emmanuel Achaab
Not even gonna read tomorrow to spare myself the cliffhanger that’s coming
David
Ikr!? It's almost as bad as a DBZ power up! JK Zog! Love the chapter *quiet voice* please don't ban me! 🙏🏼
Xander
TFTC :) I'm guessing that noone knows whats in Jakes storage anymore. I gave up trying to keep track back when Jake was stealing doors :D Suggested edits: "that could mostly counteract Jake’s *opening attack at least somewhat*." 3rd use of "opening attack" in as many sentences and the "at least somewhat" is covered by the "mostly" from a few words before. Switch the starred portion for just "initial strike". "now wasn’t the time *yet,*" Either ditch the "yet" or switch it to "it wasnt yet time" "making him sit *entirely still* and focus even more on his Unseen Hunter to stay entirely hidden." repetitive phrasing. Change this to "motionless" "If *he* acted like this all the time" should be "she" "*inter-spaced* with the greenery and" should be "interspersed" "could disguise themselves as C-grades to hide *themselves*," can ditch the second to avoid repetition.
Loststar7
Thanks for the chapter. Looking forward to suffering tomorrow’s cliffhanger you bastard 😂.
Kt-x
Thanks for the chapter!
Jose Mora
Tyftc
Arieh Sochaczevski
Thanks for the chapter! https://www.ipetitions.com/petition/zogarth-vampire-smut
Connor
Thanks for the chapter
Ed Soto
Tftc
John Burton
Minor correction: void marble is the eye of Ora's which Jake licks for perception. Void sphere is the device to create a sub dimension
Thomas Kuhn
Tftc! Looking forward to the dragon fight!
BumAssBumAss
Event horizon would've easily been able to isolate her if Jake practiced with it and learned how to use it. Or maybe it works differently, we don't know, and more importantly, Jake doesn't know. I get that he wants to use it only for some special, but to not even practice with it? That's kind of out of character because he always practices with new skills. In a far previous chapter, I remember Jake commenting that getting a new skill was exciting because he was learning how to use a new tool or something like that.
Gabe Stankiewicz
It’ll go really well on a gravestone
brjenness
Villy be like me when it's 40 minutes past the time for a fight to start and they are still going through the prefight bs. Also, I'm going to assume Jake just hasn't mentioned Artemis watching with villy. Artemis cringe at Jake's lack of archery skill. Villy saying, "is he really that bad?" And Artemis remembering Jake's snakes have no arms comment.
Morazain
Leave them wanting more... it works
Ghast Renave
Thanks for the chapter!
Alex Vlad
Aaaaaaahhhhh The Cliffhaaangeeer
IntenseSushi
Tftc tomorrows cliffhanger is going to suuuuuck
Abdulaziz ALRumaih
Peeps it’s either a shitty fight for Jake or a Friday cliff I know which one I’m betting on
Fdrugc
Tftc i was thinking Jake would shoot at her do some trash talk and run away into somewhere unpopulated hide and get off one of his opening shots.
brjenness
Maybe, but he's done that many times even one shotted a goat.
Mohammed Sheekh
Hear me out, when he uses event horizon, he's also gonna use moment of the primal hunter, turning that "glimpse" into 5 seconds of full powered arrows
Apollo Greed
Truuee Drrrrraaaggggoooonn Fight!
Mohammed Sheekh
Is his evolution quest to fight someone a grade above him?
Daniel Francis
Pride comes before a fall.
NicN
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brjenness
No idea. Dragon related. His token from helen?
Mateo Lopez
My guess is some high grade dragon parts that Jake didn’t end up using. Perhaps he is using a ritual to boost the signal so to say
brjenness
Lol
brjenness
I would think a quicker fight. He has to outpace her regeneration...unless the bane reverses that
Hopeless Harp
ALRIGHT LADDIES AND GENTS GET READY TO RUMMMMBBBLLLLEEEE
Benjamin Davis-Lorton
I love that you jumped straight to the action. Powerpoint -> hunt
Alexander C Hyde
Yrelstromoz stayed cautious, and he did spot her throw(ing) glances over her shoulder here and there, naturally never spotting a Jake who used his Pulse of Perception from over a hundred kilometers away.
brjenness
I can't think of what he had in storage to use as bait. Any guesses?
Blutako
Tyftc
Alexander C Hyde
If (s)he acted like this all the time, Jake would never have come, but now that he had seen her true face, she was only prey.
Burkes
Tomorrow and next week gonna be peak.
Blutako
https://www.ipetitions.com/petition/zogarth-vampire-smut
Beemoss
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Jana
Anyone any idea what Dragon related Treasure Jake has forgotten in his inventory? I fear I forgot it too.
JW Saxby
Nooooo! Don’t end it there 😫 Please gimme more 😅 Tftc 🍻
Wade Cox
Great pacing! Thanks for the chapter.
Daryl
Jake has completely analyzed Yrel's mindset but Yrel can't comprehend his at all 😆
Austin Gagnon
I am excited for the battle to come
Cyranosaurus
The time has come. How many chapters? All next week plus Monday? Or faster!?! Or 2 weeks? Get her Jake!!
Kris Tuchel
Whelp she is an idiot
Den
"She was a True Dragon after all" makes for a perfect epitaph
C0bra$
Thank u for the story
StrangeBee
Tyftc
Lane
Tftc
Shadow S
tftc!!
Staudi
Tyftc!
BlackRazaras
Thanks for the chapter
Christopher Nisonger
Thanks for the chapter
