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OUTDATED?? COMIC TEST FRANKENSTEIN HUH???
🕑 Added 2022-04-15 23:37:41 +0000 UTCwas testing out another sequence
this one is such a mess and i've changed it up in the script after drawing this so this might be kind of outdated, there's some panel i'd change as well, and i wanna cut some dialogue if i can. theres a lot of time skips thats would be represented by colour probably and its so sketchy that its near impossible to figure out so idk if you guys would get much from this
but uhh criticism welcome anyway
also no dialogue lmao you just get creature melt down no context
YOU KNOW WHAT, ACTUALLY- TELL ME how you'd interpret this with no dialogue, could be useful
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Frankenstein is indeed the creator's surname (he's not a professor in my au though, didnt even graduate) the monster doesn't have a name, but it might make one for itself as the story goes on. Victor usually calls it 'the subject' or 'the creation', and sometimes, when angry, 'a thing'.
DancingOni
Actually, I just realized. I called the monster "Franky" but Frankenstein is the professor obvs. but since the monster is intelligent here, does your monster have a name? does he discover a name for himself? does the doc just call him "monster" and variations of that or does he specifically call him (them? I'm assuming the doc created the thing in his own image so I guess it's male but “¯\_(ツ)_/¯“ ) a specific insult like "come here thing, are you okay thing, stay away from there thing" ?
huehue, you're on the right track, im glad... (and you know victor so well... pfpthsh) and thank you!
I find it intriguing, and I interpret this scene as creature trying to figure out their physical form, and the way it looks in their mind in this state bends and deforms in their mind as Victor explains how the physical body works (and that they’re an incredible scientific feat and how he’s so smart to do this blah blah blah) I think it’s really neat!
