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SP Partial Update
🕑 Added 2020-12-01 14:19:45 +0000 UTCThis is roughly half(?) of the next chapter of Seeking Power. I've mostly been working on the not contiguous chunk of Twilight's scenes, but Sunset and Chrysalis's is in there too. You can find it here: Chapter Twenty Two - Aftermath.
The missing scenes as of posting are the foals' sleepover, Cadance and Rarity's morning, Twilight and Luna's short night together, and a final Twilight/Celestia scene to wrap up the chapter. The latter two are the big chunks missing, I think, and I'll be writing them first.
On another note, editing for this chapter may take a while when I get there. It's very revealing of Twilight's character (and foreshadows where this story is headed), and I don't want to mess it up. So we'll see.
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Bleh. Just ran a search on the entire manuscript, and I found three more double the's. Editing is such an endless chore.
Meyer
Also re: chapter 11, ctrl-f "the the", there's an extra "the" in the published version on fimfiction.
Meyer
Great chapter so far. I love these chapters where you have a bunch of emotional exchanges line up, like in chapter 11.
