CarolJ
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Consent Is Key (unpaid minipost)
🕑 Added 2018-07-15 08:26:19 +0000 UTC I wish there was a word for a short short story. Shorter story? Sto?Anyway, I've been struggling with momentum lately, and while that's no excuse for sluggishness, it's the reason for it. That being said, I have been writing, and here's the proof!
I really like the idea of a cute, dorky girl who just happens to be capable of near-instant seduction. Sexy Prime was supposed to be about a girl who was almost completely oblivious to her own seductive prowess. While I don't think the idea was fully expressed in the story, it's still a concept that I want to explore again...with Sofia specifically!
In the meantime, I wrote a little snippet of an even dorkier girl: Mary the Succubus, who believes that it is fundamentally wrong for her to use her succubus powers to make a guy like her. Unfortunately for her, she's handicapping herself more than she realizes.
Fortunately for her, she has a guilt-free outlet for her frustrations. Enjoy!
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Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
Both of those are great things, but I mostly just love *this* specific character. ;) She's so adorable! And modelling good behaviour too. (Maybe not *optimally productive* behaviour, but she'll figure it out sooner or later. ;) )
Carol J.
I don't want to say TOO much, but you should definitely expect to see Mary in the future! I'm trying to make more multi-part stories so I can stretch my legs when it comes to characterization, and I love the idea of nerdy girls.
Zyzzyva Nineteen-Thirty-Six
That's really great :) Will there be more, or is that the whole story? :)
Yshomatsu
Ok, no rush was just checking to see if you had just forgotten to post it. Hope everything's going good on your end
Carol J.
I'm still in the process of writing it. Unfortunately, momentum is probably the single biggest obstacle when it comes to finishing a story, and I've been struggling to get back in that particular groove. That being said, it's a story that I want to see finished myself, so even if there are occasional detours, I'm definitely going to finish it!
Yshomatsu
Did you ever get a chance to update the Chance or Trance to the full file? Or are you still writing it?
