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Arcane Apocalypse ~ 48

🕑 Added 2024-10-14 16:00:16 +0000 UTC

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jeff

I think with how chaotic Arcan magic is, I would think her body would really strong at the higher level to hold that kind of power

Fi

TFTC!❤️

Stephanie Washburn

Anyway, Mia and Camilla probably need to talk about and get a handle on the contempt they're showing towards the unprofessional side of the troops. They can probably get Colonel Ziegler to discipline those guys to heck and back, and help him reform the local military in the process. But professionals like Gwen, Kelvin, and Ziegler will probably not respond well to regular displays of violent disregard for the idiots on the force. If you lose the professionals' good opinion, you lose your chance at improving the local situation, and as Mia pointed out she's got no good defense against bullets. (I think they'll probably need to depose the brigadier general in the future and having Col. Ziegler to take over will be very important in that case).

Stephanie Washburn

I suppose Mia thinking of the protection detail as being as bad as "toddlers taking an afternoon nap" may be a sign of her just not thinking clearly. All this talk of how useless those soldiers were comes off as arrogance and a misunderstanding of what those guys' job and capabilities are - at least to me. The actual thing wrong with them is absolutely not that they were ineffective and needed protecting. It is that they failed to recognize a deescalated situation, defended guys who were creating a hostile workplace environment, and then overreacted to Mia's overly destructive disarm. (The reaction to her allowing her Familiar to maul him over a sucker punch was justified). In Mia's defense, she's a civilian who has no training on how to react in circumstances like these. She probably needs emotional guidance and mentorship from authority figures she trusts. Maybe the first skill she gets taught might be the after action analysis "what did I do well, what did I do poorly, what do I think I should do next time?". In a no judgement for what happened, but is there a more proportional way you could have handled that? kind of way.

Stephanie Washburn

That's somewhat poor fire discipline for those guys to wind up like that without an order. Though they might have gotten the order before hand. Regardless, this was a reasonably well written chapter.


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