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Arcane Apocalypse ~ 87 [Edited]

🕑 Added 2025-02-21 17:00:17 +0000 UTC

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P3t1

I’ll keep to that then and forgo the (pov shifts)s in the future

Stephanie Washburn

They played perfectly fine to me. It's important to have the new character's name be in the first sentence of the new scene.

Stephanie Washburn

I bet there will be room for reorganization once the obelisk is functional. It does seem that at least Ziegler has not conscripted the populous into a forced total war economy. The civilians are doing their thing and he's doing his, at least if I remember correctly. And he does seem to have at least limited contact with Vienna. He's not a lone war lord, at least not yet.

P3t1

Hmmm. Alright. I just skimmed through this chapter and the many pov shifts threw even me for a loop, despite being the one to have written it

Stephanie Washburn

I like the change. As a note, you don't need to write (POV shift) every time, so long as those*** characters indicate a scene break.

ZephanyZephZeph

Sam ever the opportunist. I still have to wonder what place republicanism has in this new system driven world. Sure Ziegler has organized what remains of the military, but what about the state and country to support it? What even is Austria anymore? I love the geopolitical questions implied by this chaos.

Stephanie Washburn

Ooh, conspiracies! Also, good for Ziegler. It's unfortunate that he felt that was necessary, rather than incorporating those officers as his underlings, but I'm glad to hear he's solidified the military into a solid block.


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