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Arcane Apocalypse ~ 91

🕑 Added 2025-03-07 17:00:23 +0000 UTC

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Eleeyah

Hmm. This chapter felt kinda wishy-washy. There wasn't any progress to be felt. The conversation Mia had with Nikki didn't give any interesting results since it completely ignored the actually relevant ones (like whether or not Mia's spell book skill will rank up, etc.), her affinity didn't go anywhere (even though that was the build up when she got two during her last rift... >.>). There wasn't really any plot progress either (this would've been a *really* good time for that Gabe POV). Basically...it was kinda nothing? XD To be clear, I do still enjoy your story. I just might not enjoy the uncoordinated mish-mash of nothing the plot and progress is at the moment.


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