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Arcane Apocalypse ~ 92

🕑 Added 2025-03-10 17:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Eleeyah

(coming from the previous chapter's feedback...) However, this chapter was really good. It felt like it had a purpose and direction, and provided a proper hook for the attention. You could probably delete the previous chapter entirely, and it wouldn't much affect the story. Frankly, it'd be difficult to tell anything was missing. But that's not the case with this chapter. :)

Stephanie Washburn

Also that was a perfect set of scene and perspective transitions! You've got it

Stephanie Washburn

Aww, I'm so proud of them.

P3t1

Np. 👍 You only gave me a minor heart attack.

jeff

Miss read it it was correct.


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