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MA Book 2, Ch 5.1 The Crimson Witch
🕑 Added 2025-10-21 11:00:10 +0000 UTCThe confrontation came three days later, arriving with the grim inevitability of a desert sunrise.
Su Lian had known it would come. In a place like Onyx Pass — a festering wound of a town clinging to the last vestiges of Imperial authority before the lawless expanse of the Great Southern Dune Sea — violence and intimidation were the currencies that mattered. She'd humiliated someone connected. She'd demonstrated power. And in this harsh, unforgiving frontier where strength was the only law that truly mattered, such things demanded response.
She'd spent those three intervening days in her cramped, overpriced room at the Scorpion's Tail Inn, subsisting on the strange Qingshan flatbreads and trying—with diminishing success—to ignore the increasingly hostile atmosphere. The prostitute, whose name she'd learned was Mei Lin, had spread the story of the "interfering cultivator bitch" with impressive efficiency. By the second day, even the one-eyed innkeeper had begun giving Su Lian looks that suggested her continued patronage was becoming a liability he'd rather not bear.
She sat now in what had become her usual corner of the common room, mechanically working through another of those peculiar “Qingshan-style” flatbreads. This one, according to the serving girl's bored explanation, was topped with "spiced sand lizard and dried sun-peppers." The meat had an unexpectedly pleasant, slightly gamey flavor that reminded her of quail, and the peppers carried a slow-building heat that warmed her throat. The bread itself — crisp on the edges, chewy in the center — was admittedly excellent, far better than its humble appearance suggested.
She was taking a large bite of the flatbread and trying not to think about how her once-refined palate had adapted so readily to this strange Frontier fare, when she sensed a group approaching.
They entered.
Not subtly. Not quietly. But with the deliberate, attention-commanding presence of predators who wanted their prey to know they were being hunted.
It was seven men this time.
Three she recognized from the initial incident — the leering fools who'd been speaking with Lin, though, notably, the one whose hand she'd burned was absent, presumably still nursing his injury and cursing her name. The other four were new faces, and Su Lian's cultivator senses — that subtle awareness of spiritual pressure that all practitioners developed — immediately categorized them.
Two were Xue Qi practitioners. Mortal Martial Artists rather than true cultivators. She could tell by the way they moved — bodies honed to physical perfection, muscles dense with Blood Qi that had been refined and tempered through painful conditioning. Stage Two of Body Tempering, probably. Dangerous to mortals. Capable of feats that would seem superhuman to common folk. But still fundamentally limited by their physical forms, unable to project Qi externally or manipulate the spiritual energy of the world around them.
The other two were Ling Qi cultivators — practitioners of spiritual energy like herself, though vastly weaker. Early Stage Two of Qi Gathering at best, she estimated. Barely above the threshold of true cultivation, their spiritual pressure like candle flames compared to even her deliberately suppressed aura.
And at their center stood the leader.
He was perhaps forty years old, with a face like weathered leather stretched over sharp bones. His eyes held a predatory intelligence that the others lacked — the calculating gaze of someone who'd survived in this harsh environment through cunning as much as strength. He moved with measured, efficient grace, his steps economical and purposeful. Not the swagger of a thug, but the controlled gait of someone who'd actually trained properly.
Stage Five of Qi Gathering, Su Lian assessed immediately, her spiritual senses reading the density and refinement of his aura. Competent by provincial standards — most cultivators in backwater towns like this never progressed beyond Stage Three or Four. In Fallen Star City — let alone the provincial capital of Yuhang — someone like him wouldn't have merited a second glance from any of the major families. But here, at the edge of civilization, he probably passed for a genuine expert.
How laughable.
The tavern went quiet as they approached her table. Not the tense, expectant silence of her previous confrontation, but something heavier— the weary resignation of people who'd seen this scene play out too many times before and knew exactly how it would end. Patrons shifted in their seats, creating space, ensuring they wouldn't be caught in whatever violence was about to unfold. The serving girls retreated toward the kitchen. Even the perpetual dice game at the bar paused, the players watching with the morbid fascination of spectators at an execution.
One of the men from the original incident—a heavyset brute with a crooked nose and mean, pig-like eyes—pointed at Su Lian with a thick finger. "That's her, Boss Qian! That’s the bitch who burned Feng's hand!"
"I can see perfectly well — now, be silent." The leader's voice was surprisingly cultured, refined even — the accent of someone who'd been educated, who'd come from better circumstances before ending up in this frontier wasteland. He held up a hand, silencing his subordinate, and approached Su Lian's table with measured steps.
His spiritual senses were probing her, Su Lian realized. Subtle questing tendrils of Qi, trying to gauge her strength, to understand what level of cultivator he was dealing with.
For now, she'd kept her aura’s suppression tight, giving away nothing.
"So…. you're the one who burned my nephew's hand," he said, and it wasn't a question. His tone was reasonable, almost conversational —the voice of a merchant discussing terms rather than a gang enforcer delivering threats. He pulled out a chair without invitation and sat across from her, his men arranging themselves in a practiced formation that blocked easy escape routes. The choreography was smooth, professional.
They must have done this before.
Su Lian set down her flatbread with deliberate care, meeting his gaze without flinching. She noted the quality of his robes — decent silk, practical cut, but worn at the cuffs and mended in places. A man who'd once known a measure of wealth but had fallen on harder times. The sword at his hip was decent steel, well-maintained but unremarkable. His hands bore calluses in the specific patterns of long practice with blade work.
"He dared to reach for my body" she said quietly. "I simply taught him a lesson."
A thin smile crossed Boss Qian's face, not quite reaching his eyes. "Oh, absolutely! Self-defense is a sacred right. Unfortunately for you, my nephew is also my responsibility. His medical bills, you understand — plus his lost wages while he recovers, the emotional distress, the damage to our organization's reputation when word spreads that we allow our people to be injured without consequence... these factors create what we in the local business community call 'outstanding debts.'"
He folded his hands on the table, the gesture practiced and deliberately non-threatening.
"I'm a reasonable man. I understand you're clearly... between circumstances at the moment." His eyes swept over her deliberately dirtied appearance with knowing assessment. "Maybe you are running from something and trying to remain unnoticed. I can respect that. We all have our pasts. Now, here's where I can give you a choice."
"Option one," he continued, lifting a finger, "you pay compensation. I'm thinking... let's say, ten taels of gold. That covers medical expenses, lost income, and… a reasonable payment for the insult to my organization. A very fair offer, considering the severity of the situation."
Su Lian felt a cold spike of anger at the absurdity of the sum. Ten gold taels. Two hundred gold coins. The equivalent of years of wages for a skilled craftsman. An impossible amount to procure for anyone but the wealthy elite or successful merchants. He was deliberately pricing the "compensation" beyond what any desperate refugee could possibly pay.
"And… option two?" she asked, though she already knew. The script was ancient, universal. Extortion followed the same patterns whether conducted in high society or frontier gutters.
"Option two," Boss Qian said, his smile widening slightly, "is you work off the debt. See, I run a modest… security operation here in Onyx Pass. We offer protection services, dispute resolution, asset recovery; occasionally, even enforcement of contracts that the garrison commander doesn't care to involve himself with. I am always looking for talented individuals to join our organization."
He leaned forward slightly, his voice dropping to a more confidential tone. "And I can tell, beneath all that grime and those rags you're hiding under, that you have some training. Maybe you were a retainer for some minor family before things went badly? Maybe you studied at a provincial martial academy before running afoul of the wrong people? I don't need to know the details. What I do need — is competent muscle."
His eyes studied her face, looking for reactions.
"Just six months of service — nothing too demanding, just helping maintain order in our territory, discouraging troublemakers, collecting debts from reluctant clients, that sort of thing. After that, your debt will be cleared, and you'd be free to go.”
He leaned forward slyly.
“Or… you can stay on permanently if you prove valuable — you’ll find that I pay quite well, and the work is steady. It’s a much better option than skulking around in rags pretending to be some desperate refugee while wondering when your next meal will come."
He spread his hands in a gesture of false magnanimity.
"You might even find you enjoy it. I find there's a certain... satisfaction in establishing and maintaining order. In being respected. In having people step aside when you walk down the street."
Su Lian felt the familiar cold knot of anger forming in her chest — that same impotent rage she'd felt a thousand times while traveling over the past six months. The casual assumption that she could be bought or intimidated, that her principles and dignity were commodities to be bought and sold, that strength gave him the right to dictate terms to someone he perceived as weaker… It was the same pattern she'd seen repeatedly since fleeing her home: the strong exploiting the weak, wrapping it in reasonable-sounding words and practical justifications, but underneath it all was just the same old story.
Might making right.
"And if I refuse both options?" she asked quietly, her voice carefully neutral.
The reasonable expression never left Boss Qian's face, but something shifted in his eyes — a hardness creeping in like ice forming on still water. "Then we’ll have a problem, Young Miss. And you will find that, in Onyx Pass, problems tend to get... resolved. One way or another."
He gestured vaguely at the tavern around them, at the patrons studiously avoiding looking in their direction.
"This is a rough town, Miss Whatever-Your-Name-Is. Accidents happen. People disappear all the time. The garrison commander — Peak Foundation Establishment, very respected man — has made it quite clear that he doesn't concern himself with disputes between unregistered drifters with no connections and established local businesses. As long as we don't disrupt trade or cause problems for the Guild-sanctioned merchant caravans, he's content to let us maintain order in our own way."
He leaned back in his chair, the picture of relaxed confidence.
"So really, you should be thanking me. I'm offering you a choice. That's more courtesy than most would show! Some of my competitors — uncivilized savages as they are — would have simply had you dragged into a back alley and… disciplined… until you understood your place in the local hierarchy. I prefer to conduct business more civilly."
For a long moment, Su Lian simply sat there, feeling the accumulated weight of six months' worth of indignities pressing down on her shoulders like a physical burden. Six months of hiding. Of cowering. Of making herself small and insignificant and forgettable. Six months of accepting the worst rooms and the stalest food. Of being shortchanged by merchants who saw a desperate refugee. Of walking with her head down and her power locked away behind layers of careful suppression.
Six months of pretending she was something less than what she truly was.
Six months of swallowing her pride and her anger because the alternative was death, or discovery, or worse.
She looked at Boss Qian — at his confident smile, his “reasonable” tone, his absolute certainty that she would either pay or submit because that's what weak people did when confronted by the strong.
She looked at his followers, standing in their practiced formation, secure in their numerical advantage and their leader's pathetic Stage Five cultivation.
She saw the tavern patrons watching with weary acceptance, expecting her to fold, or flee, or beg for mercy.
And something inside her, something that had been bent and compressed and strained for half a year, finally reached its breaking point.
She was so very, very tired of pretending.
"No," Su Lian said simply, and the word felt like a door opening onto fresh air.
Boss Qian's smile faltered slightly. "I'm sorry?"
"No." She leaned back in her chair slowly, deliberately, feeling months of careful suppression beginning to crack. "I will not be pay your extortion fees. I will not work for your pathetic little gang. I will not sit here and allow you to threaten me as if I were some helpless mark to be intimidated by third-rate provincial thugs."
Her voice was quiet, but it carried — a tone of absolute certainty that made several nearby patrons shift uncomfortably in their seats.
Boss Qian's expression shifted, confidence giving way to confusion and then the first hints of anger. "Now, listen here, girl! I don't think you understand your situation—"
"No," Su Lian interrupted, and her voice growing cold and hard. "I don't think you understand yours."
And she let the restraint on her aura drop.
Not completely, of course — that would have been catastrophic, probably burning down much of the building and injuring the mortals present.
But enough. Just enough to let the truth of what she was bleed through.
The spiritual pressure of a Foundation Establishment cultivator — albeit one deliberately holding back most of her power — filled the cramped tavern like a sudden thunderstorm rolling across empty plains. It didn't shatter furniture, or crack stone, or make the air itself visible with spiritual density. But to the Qi Gathering cultivators before her, to the Stage Five leader who'd thought himself the strongest person in the room, it must have felt like standing on solid ground and suddenly realizing that said “ground” was actually the back of a sleeping dragon.
And that dragon had just awakened and made eye contact.
The effect was instantaneous and visceral.
Many of the thugs stumbled backward as if physically struck, their faces draining of all color. One of them actually fell, his legs simply giving out as his own meager cultivation base instinctively recoiled from the vast chasm of power differential. His spiritual pressure, such as it was, was being smothered by hers, like trying to keep a candle lit in a windstorm.
The Martial Artists fared slightly better, their internal Xue Qi giving them some resistance to the Ling Qi spiritual pressure — but even they looked ill — faces pale, sweat beading on their foreheads, their carefully cultivated physical strength suddenly feeling inadequate in the face of a threat that transcended mere flesh.
But Boss Qian — well, Boss Qian, who had sat so confidently across from her, who had made his threats with such casual certainty, who had assumed his Stage Five cultivation made him the apex predator in any room full of desperate refugees — Boss Qian looked like a man who'd just watched the sun rise in the west. His carefully maintained composure shattered like cheap pottery dropped on stone. The color fled from his face, leaving his weathered skin an unhealthy gray. His hands, which had been resting so casually on the table, began trembling —not with conscious fear exactly, but with the body's involuntary response to recognizing a threat so far beyond its capacity to handle that panic was the only rational response.
His mouth opened and closed several times, no sound emerging. His spiritual senses, which had been probing her so confidently just moments before, now recoiled as if scalded. He could feel it now — could feel the vast ocean of refined spiritual energy that she'd been hiding just beneath the skin. Could sense the fundamental difference between someone who had broken through to Foundation Establishment and someone not even in the later stages of Qi Gathering.
The difference in strength wasn't a matter of degree. It wasn't like comparing someone at Stage Five to someone at, say, Stage Six or Seven. No, the gulf between Qi Gathering and Foundation Establishment was qualitative, not merely quantitative. It was the difference between Earth and Heaven, between honey and excrement, between someone who merely cultivated spiritual energy and someone whose very body had been transformed into a vessel for it.
A mere Qi Gathering cultivator was not particularly noteworthy in the immortal world. Their spiritual energy resided in their dantian, their lower energy center, circulating through their meridians. That energy was still — fundamentally — diffuse and separate from their physical form. They could project that Qi outward, could enhance their bodies temporarily, could perform techniques that seemed miraculous to mortals.
But a Foundation Establishment cultivator had liquefied their Qi. Compressed it. Refined it. And then rebuilt their entire physical form around it. Their flesh, their bones, their very blood — all of it had been fundamentally transformed, saturated with spiritual energy until the distinction between body and spirit became blurred. They could draw on power that someone in Qi Gathering couldn't even begin to access. They could regenerate from injuries that would cripple or kill lesser cultivators. They could live for two — or, in rarer cases, even three — centuries rather than merely extended decades.
Boss Qian, with his Stage Five Qi Gathering cultivation that had taken him decades to achieve, that had probably required lucky encounters, expensive resources, and constant risk — he could no more fight Su Lian than a child could wrestle an ox.
And he knew it.
"You..." The word came out strangled, barely a whisper. He tried again, his voice hoarse. "You're... Foundation..."
"Early Foundation Establishment, yes," Su Lian confirmed, her deadpan voice carrying an edge of barely restrained fury that had been building for six months. "Though I suppose the distinction hardly matters for an ant like you."
She took a calm sip of the house cider, while releasing another fraction of her aura. The spiritual pressure in the room grew heavier. Boss Qian flinched back in his chair as if she'd raised a hand to strike him. His subordinates, already backed up against the far wall, looked ready to bolt through the door.
"I'm going to give you a choice now," Su Lian purred, her tone mimicking his earlier false reasonableness. "And I suggest you consider it very, very carefully. Because unlike you, I don't make idle threats, and actually have the power to make good on them."
She let a tiny thread of Fire Qi — bright, pure, and absolutely controlled — dance across her fingertips. The flames were beautiful, a vivid crimson-gold that seemed almost alive, casting flickering shadows across the tavern walls. The heat they generated was intense enough that Boss Qian, sitting several feet away, began sweating despite the relatively cool interior temperature.
This was no common fire technique. This was the manifestation of Su Lian’s Phoenix bloodline: flames that could easily melt through steel or be used to refine spiritual materials. Heat that transcended normal combustion and touched on the fundamental Dao of transformation and rebirth.
"Option one," Su Lian said, her voice deadly quiet, "you leave. You leave this inn immediately. You leave me alone permanently. You tell anyone you can — including your injured nephew — that I am not to be bothered under any circumstances. You absorb the… emotional distress… of your family member's stupidity as a much-needed learning experience about the inadvisability of touching unknown cultivators without permission."
The flames intensified slightly, dancing higher, their crimson-gold light painting her face with an otherworldly glow. In that moment, with her Phoenix bloodline active and her amber eyes beginning to shine with internal light, Su Lian looked less like a desperate refugee and more like exactly what she was: a dangerous cultivator whose bloodline traced back to the legendary creatures that had been the symbol of a past Imperial dynasty.
"Option two," she continued, and her smile was not kind, "you decide to get foolish, and try to make this a problem. Maybe you send more men. Maybe you report me to the garrison commander — though, I suspect a Peak Foundation Establishment expert will be very annoyed to waste his time with disputes between an insignificant gnat like you and someone of my level."
The flames around her fingers condensed, compressed, and then split — becoming many needle-thin spears of concentrated Fire Qi that looked more like solid light than combustion. They hovered there, perfectly controlled, each one capable of punching through steel or bone with equal ease.
"And, if you decide to do so, I shall then demonstrate, publicly and conclusively, exactly why low-talent Mid-Stage Qi Gathering cultivators should not attempt to extort powerful Foundation Establishment ones.”
She paused theatrically, as if in contemplation.
“I would start with you, I think — perhaps by grilling you alive in front of your men. And then… I would systematically dismantle your entire organization. Every enforcer, every thug, every person who works for you would learn exactly what happens when an uppity provincial gang forgets the natural order that governs our world."
She let the implications hang in the air for a moment, watching Boss Qian's face cycle through expressions. He swallowed hard, his Adam's apple bobbing. For a moment, Su Lian thought he might actually be stupid enough to escalate. She could see the struggle in his eyes — pride warring with survival instinct. After all, he'd likely built his entire operation — his entire identity, even — on being the strongest man in his sphere of influence.
The humiliation of this encounter might prove devastating to him. But the alternative was death.
And, at the end of the day, death, however dignified… was still death.
Survival instinct won.
"H-honored senior! We..." He had to stop, clear his throat, and try again. "We’ll be leaving now. There's been a... a misunderstanding! Yes, a grave misunderstanding! I had no idea — I mean, we couldn't sense — I… I apologize, honored senior, for the offense we've given—"
"I am not your senior," Su Lian interrupted coldly. "Seniors are owed respect through acknowledged differences in achievement and contribution. You've achieved nothing but intimidating the weak, and even being compared to a worm like you is already an insult. Now… Scram."
The word was delivered with enough spiritual pressure behind it that the furniture in the room actually rattled slightly.
The thugs scrambled for the exit with a desperation that might have been comical if Su Lian hadn't been shaking with the aftermath of her own audacity. “Boss Qian” practically stumbled over his own feet in his haste to reach the door. His subordinates were already gone, having fled the moment she'd dismissed them, their pride secondary to their very strong survival instincts.
The door slammed shut behind them, and for several heartbeats, the silence continued.
Then, gradually, like birds returning after a storm passes, the normal sounds of the tavern resumed. There were murmured conversations. The clink of cups. The crackle of the fire pit. But the energy had changed. The looks directed at Su Lian now were fundamentally different —no longer dismissive or hostile, but wary. Respectful.
And more than a little fearful.
A genuine Foundation Establishment cultivator! Here, in their midst! A real expert — not some barely-trained Qi Gathering thug pretending to be strong, but someone who could flatten a building with a single technique if sufficiently provoked.
Su Lian slowly released her spiritual pressure, pulling it back behind layers of suppression, though not as tightly as before. There was no longer a point in trying to hide completely — after all, everyone in the tavern would spread this story, and by tomorrow, everyone who was anyone in Onyx Pass would know about her being here.
She sat back down, reaching for her now-cold flatbread with hands that trembled slightly, and wondered whether she'd just made her situation better or catastrophically worse.
The innkeeper approached her table a few minutes later, walking with the cautious respect one might show a coiled Cobra. He set down a fresh flatbread —still hot, she noticed— and a cup of decent wine that she certainly hadn't ordered.
"Compliments of the house, honored cultivator," he said, his gruff voice noticeably more polite than it had been in previous days. "And... I do apologize if your accommodations thus far have been unsatisfactory. If you wish to move to a better room, I can arrange—"
"The current room is fine," Su Lian interrupted. She didn't have the energy or patience to deal with the sudden obsequiousness. "Thank you for the meal."
He nodded quickly and retreated, clearly relieved not to engage further.
Su Lian ate her flatbread in silence, tasting nothing, her mind racing through implications. Boss Qian would certainly spread the word. The garrison commander would likely hear about it. And, while she'd been right that he probably wouldn't care about a gang being humiliated, the presence of an unknown Foundation Establishment cultivator in his territory was a different matter. He'd most certainly want to know who she was, where she came from, what her intentions were.
Such questions would lead to investigations, and investigations… might lead to discoveries she couldn't afford.
She needed to leave Onyx Pass. As soon as possible.
But how?
Comments
Konstantin Parkhomenko
There are three MCs in book 2.
Van234
Ok, so I am bored. MC chapters are fine, even if I am not a fan of amnesia, but I kind of see what you are doing. Will it be worth it future will tell. But for side charecters, I could not care less. They can be cool if you show us MC actions from different perspective. His sister and princess chapters are meh but are a bit related to MC. But Su chapters? I just dont care, she is not a likeble person and it just regular cultivation stuff. I had a same opinion with previous book, side chapters are not as fun, you had a bit too much at the end of the book,but here you just lay it too thick at the start. I may be compleatly wrong on your readers base expectations, this is just my outlook.
ghosthammer
Would be pretty funny if she goes through all this only to end up as Jiang Li sidechick years down the line
Aglovale Sempai
This is the Jiang Li dealing with his unruly guard at home, electric bogaloo Yeah, Onyx pass is no longer a place to rest, wonder if she'd go into the wilderness or try her luck into another frontier town She could do a Jiang Yue and do more exploring, I guess
