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Early access to next Vidya
🕑 Added 2024-08-30 09:52:39 +0000 UTCEarly Access to the next video How to All Hit Elden Ring.
All aspects of the video are subject to change.
Credits will be updated before full release so no bamboozle.
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ymfah
Thank you for all the suggestions. I'll make sure all these fixes are in place before the full upload!
Colin Shen
18:16 "not to worry" is less common but totally normal 49:25 you are benefiting, and you are doing it from inside the fog wall. i don't think this one needs to be changed either.
Colin Shen
0:08 Hardtear, Crimsonburst, Boiled, Vengeance 13:17 Bestial 13:32 Bestial Vitality 16:44 will 18:18 Morbin' 21:26 beaten 22:53 sleeve 34:23 Rennala 35:23 Lion's 35:37 burst (?) 36:20 BS 38:07 leaves 39:35 Except tank it (?) 44:06 Let's 44:48 rally 45:52 Messmer 47:41 range, damage, and regen are 47:51 amounts of damage
Ajiak
So excited to watch this tonight! Hell yeah!
Bird Garlicky
Also 42:11, probably add a question mark after "how". 47:39 is fine but a bit easier to understand if you replace "range, damage, regen" with "range, damage and regen". Great video as always and the music choices hit extra hard I feel!
Von
I did spelling checks and found some errors. 16:45 "Buffs will start running out" instead of "Buffs with start running out" 18:16 "But no worries" instead "But not to worry" (this one is a bit tricky, but I feel like my suggestion works better) 23:12 his name is Niall, not "Nial" 25:45 ff.: I suggest using angle brackets instead of circular brackets to make it clearer what you are referring to. "8 [+8] stones in the tunnel" or "8 [8] in the tunnel" instead of "8 (8) in the tunnel". Same goes for the rest of the segment where you were listing upgrade materials. 26:30 missing a comma: "So, what weapon should we upgrade?" would be correct punctuation there 27:35 and 27:45 "Unus" instead of "Unnus" 38:11 "But she leaves me no choice" instead of "But she leave me no choice" 44:50 "Adds Bloodborne's "Rally" mechanic" instead of "Adds Bloodborne ralley mechanic" 45:53 his name is Messmer, not "Mesmer" 49:25 since you are not benefiting from the fog's Inside or the buff's inside (lol), this should probably be "And benefit from it inside the boss room" I'd also like to help further with spell checking in the future. Will DM you about this
