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Movie Production Diary #29

🕑 Added 2021-10-20 13:00:08 +0000 UTC

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The Ghost of Dave Thomas

Another potential terrible Ed line: So Trey, you got any BAEs?

Joylesstiger

For the scene with Sarah and the baby, maybe you could have her ask the baby what he learned today and he pulls out a book and turns to something like dinosaurs and starts to talk about it and she sees drawing in the margins and then cut to her flashing a knowing smile. Might be hard to pull off but it's subtle. Also, I like that you're not leaning into the evil foster dad, he can be bad without being Dickensian.


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