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Movie Production Diary #26
🕑 Added 2021-09-29 13:01:03 +0000 UTCAs we recently announced, we're making a movie and a true crime podcast, and we're making them in full view of you, our Patrons. Today, we worked on the Furry Movie. In this episode, Michael and Abe discuss some of the arcs that need to be fleshed out more after critical responses. This week we worked on how the climax can feel more rewarding and what we need to build in order for it to resonate with the audience.
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Oliver Allen
What if Trey's mom arranges it so he gets lifeguard duty as community service and it's at a senior community center? It can set up why he does the life safer ring toss cause he's bored. Ahmed could drop by talking about how he got stuck picking up trash on the side of a freeway, joking about how "you'd be surprised how many 'such and such's people throw out as their driving" Then Ahmed hears an eldery woman making like a dolphin squeal, turns and says to Trey, "He I think that lady's drowning" then Trey replies while not breaking his lackluster concentration on his throwing game, "No, that's just how Miss Chen flirts." Then cut to a shot of some old guys walking by Miss Chen, maybe the guy's are wearing those old one piece bathing suits? That way when Trey is at the convention trying to get a furry suit, he runs into Miss Chen who recognizes him and let's him borrow her dolphin suit? Brandon could be outside of the furry con with his flunkie/buddy doing like a tiktok making fun of people outside the con. They see Trey going in and decide to sneak in to try to mess with Trey. When Trey gets inside the Furry Ball, he could see Art up on stage for some movie reason and notice Brandon and his flunkie setting up some sort of prank they're gonna play on Art. Trey looks around and sees a life saver shaped object nearby and some rope, and just as they're about to initiate the prank, Trey says a quick, "hope this works" and tosses the life saver on Brandon while his flunkie is filming it. The flunkie realizes it's time to run before he gets caught for sneaking in, bumps into security. Art realizes he just got saved, thanks the dolphin, Trey reveals himself to Art. Art hugs and thanks him. Brandon is trying to wriggle out of the life saver, accidentally falls into the crowd as they body surf him to the exit as he yells something like "get your hands off me you fury freaks!" Just a thought I had while listening. Anyways, I really enjoy these. Look forward to it's continued progression.
Shawn Parks
I thought that a good way to emphasize Trey feeling like Art is replacing him would be to have Hank accidentally call Art by Trey's name in front of Trey.
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