WheretheSunsetsButDontShine
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Page 11 script
🕑 Added 2021-02-01 15:54:31 +0000 UTCPage 11
Panel 1
Celestia, Sunset & Ms. Harshwhinny are standing in the hallway. Lockers in the background. Celestia is on the left, Sunset is in the middle, and Ms. Harshwhinny is on the right. Celestia is smiling and handing Sunset a tablet. Sunset is giving Celestia a strange look. She’s never seen technology like this before but rolls with it.
Ms. Harshwhinny has an exaggerated expression of anger. She’s beat red. She looks like she’s about to burst a blood vessel while reading Sunset’s ID card. She is still wearing her cravat, blouse, and dress from before.
CELESTIA
Here, take this. Ask any student for help on how to use it.
SUNSET
Um. Thanks?
HARSHWHINNY
NUDIST?!
Panel 2
Same placement as before. No new characters. Celestia has a pleasant expression. She’s looking towards Harshwhinny. Sunset has the same smug expression from page 4. She’s holding the tablet against her chest.
Harshwhinny still looks completely upset and disheveled but is handing the ID card back to Sunset.
CELESTIA
Please show Miss Sunset to Ms. Cheerilee’s class.
HARSHWHINNY
Fine.
Panel 3
Harshwhinny is now on the left side of the panel. She’s opening a classroom door and sticking her head inside. Sunset is standing to the right behind her. She held the tablet by her hip.
HARSHWHINNY
Pardon the interruption, Ms. Cheerilee. I, um, have a new student to introduce.
CHEERILEE (Off-Screen)
Oh? Please show them in. Class, let’s take a break.
Panel 4
Classroom scene.
We can see Sunset from the back. We are going for more expressions here of the students who take up the majority of the center and right of the panel. Cheerilee is standing to the far right. They all have the same expression of shock and awe. Some near the front look confused.
SUNSET
Hello everypony. I’m Sunset Shimmer!
