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Spoiler Thread for Leaf 002

🕑 Added 2018-06-23 13:57:54 +0000 UTC

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Christian Matzke

I will NEVER use Derleth's methodology, I promise you that. The paths align with Wilbur's reference, plus Deep Ones and Migo (more or less). So not elementals but locations for contact?

Ooh. This is interesting; I got most of the references, but some flew right over my head. I do have one question, though; I really like what you’re doing with the footnotes, and while I admit I was a little unnerved by the references to Air, Water, etc. (“Please no Derleth, please no Derleth, please no Derleth!”) this post has put me more at ease with regard to what you intend to do with those, but in your post “Research Materials,” you mention that you’re thinking of this, in part, as being 200 short stories that need to be linked together. Will those vignettes build fully on one another, or will they be more self-contained? I ask because, at least in the first two leaves, the transition from Ibn Yakrib to another mystic in the desert in the space of a page or two was a little...I don’t want to say JARRING, exactly, but really, how many mystics can there be hiding out in one desert? This may be a very silly question, and I apologize for my worries, but we aren’t going to have 200-ish random characters popping up for a page or two and then disappearing again, vignette by vignette, are we? It’s just what you’ve got so far is SO good, stylistically and artistically, and I would very much want the narrative itself to live up to everything else. Oh! I lied, actually; I do have one other question. In several stories, (From Beyond, Colour, and Whisperer come to mind, though Dreams in the Witch House is where this is really used most intriguingly), Lovecraft weaves modern science into his story, with the conceit (in Witchhouse, particularly) that some of the ancient, secret, hidden lore contains scientific and mathematical knowledge, presumably gifted to the writers by nonhuman sources, that has snuck on through the centuries hidden and unnoticed. This was also used to brilliant effect in the H.P.L.H.S.’ Dark Adventure Radio Theater episode for Witchhouse, which among other props included a torn page from Gilman’s journal, with physics scrawlings that, if you know something about the subject matter, are actually brilliantly relevant to the story itself (proto-M-theory, for example). Will this play any prominent role in your Necronomicon, in terms of the conception of the world described by Alhazred, the sigils contained within (which might represent, say, relativistic equations, just in a completely different notation), etc.? I don’t know what background you may or may not have in that area or what resources you may have access to, in terms of folks who DO know enough about those subjects to be able to help you, so maybe that’s not really practicable (and even if it IS, I imagine you can’t say much about it due to spoilers), but...well, I don’t even know what my question is, I guess. I’d love to see that, if you’ve got that planned I’m elated, if you don’t have it planned the book already looks brilliant.


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