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SamCyberCat

Pulled up my chair to read all of these and it's been a wonderful way to spend the evening. "Last Escort" was a strong start - it was short and hit all of it's emotional beats very well, knowing exactly what it was setting out to do and hitting the mark perfectly. Having spent much of my life as a civilian alongside an RAF base, you really got the rookie and senior dynamic down to a tea. After reading that, I thought that surely the other two stories couldn't top this, but I was wrong. "Never King" was such a journey that I feel like will be very important lore to know at some point. I mean, I am mostly trying to hold off on Drogune until you guys get the final pass out, so I assume this is the case, anyway. I thought that I'd guessed the twist early on, but thankfully it ended up not being as gruesome as I'd feared, because the new Never King seems like too much of an engaging character to just toss out like that. It was maddening, in a good way, to hit the point where the story stopped, so I look forward to seeing the finished version "Saltpelt" was hands down my favourite. Which is impressive, because all of these were excellent. Aww man, it's a seafaring story! Those are always the best! Rime was just the most likeable guy and by contrast, you sold Baha as a scummy villain so well. When they reached the part with the babies and a few of the crew followed Rime in solidarity, that was such a great moment. One of those "gives you faith in people" kind of moments. Then the justice being served towards the end being so ominous was a good touch as well. All of these are going to stick with me and I'm grateful that you're writing all this extra prose to expand upon the whole world of Drogune.


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