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A Third Reflection (Metroid)

🕑 Added 2022-06-01 14:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Ian Flynn

Thanks!

CarfyLeChance

That was a really interesting read, excellently-paced, and ended without overstaying its welcome - namely it ended with me wanting more instead of sighing with relief it had finally ended (a craft that I myself need to get much better at in my own creative writings). I liked how you captured the feel of Metroid worlds and locations in your writing, too, and emulated fights and traversal in said game universe, and even capturing the art of Samus speaking expertly, for a character who speaks so little, I found myself nodding with nerdy approval to her every response, internal and external that you put in here. You're a predominantly busy creator, but should you feel the urge to write more of this, please don't hesitate to do so and post it, would love to see more of this novelisation-of-Metroid-ness, and where this particular story goes from here! \(^o^)/


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