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Chapter Seventy-Eight (TIBK)
🕑 Added 2025-09-16 08:54:43 +0000 UTC"Shut the door, Olaf."
Sindri, Yorick, Isolde, Olaf, and Leif stood clustered near the massive table inside the same chamber where he had met with Borin and Varina. This room surely was getting more and more busy by the day.
The big man slammed the timber shut that made dust sift from the ceiling.
"The Frost Mother," Eirik began, "works in ways we barely comprehend. Her statue is one manifestation. The ice walls another. The power She grants Her vessel... it evolves."
He locked eyes with Sindri, Yorick, and Isolde in turn.
"It has evolved. She has bestowed upon you – Sindri, Yorick, Isolde – a fragment of Her clarity. A tool. A way to serve Abercrombie more directly. Do you feel it?"
Sindri raised a trembling hand towards the stone wall beside him.
"The... the weight... the angles..." he rasped. "I see... stress lines. Like veins in the stone. Here... and here... weak points... "
Then, a shimmering blueprint of interconnected shafts and mirrored chambers seemed to hover faintly in the space before him for a fraction of a second before dissolving.
Yorick gasped, stumbling back a step. Leif frowned, trying to see what Sindri was seeing.
"Precisely," Eirik said. "Sindri. You are now Master of Construction. That... clarity... is yours to command. Think of it as a blueprint magic of sorts. Build accordingly."
Sindri looked utterly overwhelmed, yet a fierce light burned in his one good eye.
"Aye... Commander. I... I will. Thank you."
Yorick, unable to contain himself any longer, blurted out.
"Commander! It’s... numbers! Everywhere! But not just numbers!" He waved his quill wildly at his ledger. "Hovering above it! Everywhere! When I look at Fisk... Fisk! It says 'Stall Income: 47 Talons/Daily.' That little ferret! I knew he was holding back!"
Then his gaze darted around the room. "Leif... Leif has... 'Personal Wealth: 150 Talons, 8 Copper'. And... and Olaf! 'Owed Wages: 30 Talons'. Thirty Talons! Olaf, you forgot to collect your wage yesterday! And... oh! Food stores! Mushroom Yields!"
He slammed his ledger shut, breathing hard.
"Did I just became Master of Coin? This... this is... impossible! Miraculous!"
Isolde took the surprise better than the other two.
"I also see things that I don't see before. But not in the same way as Master Sindri and Master Yorick. I see a map with relationship status. Is that also your making, Commander?"
Eirik offered her a small nod.
The tension in the room, already high, snapped. Olaf, who had been glowering with increasing confusion, finally erupted. His massive fist slammed onto the stone table, making Yorick yelp and Sindri flinch.
"ENOUGH!" Olaf roared. "What in the frozen hells is this?! Glowing! Numbers in the air! Seeing into stones like some Skarl Shaman! Power?!"
He jabbed a thick finger first at Sindri, then Yorick, then Isolde.
"They get this... this Mother's Clarity? A broken rock-carver! A jumped-up scribe! A noblewoman who was trying to ruin us a season ago!" He turned his furious gaze on Eirik. "And us?! Me and Leif?! We bled on the ice for you! We held the line against Skarls while this one counted coppers!"
He pointed at Yorick.
"We faced down the Chantress’s magic! What do we get? A pat on the head? Orders to stand guard while they play with magic lights?!"
Leif didn’t shout, but the hurt and simmering anger in his voice was just as potent.
"Commander. Olaf speaks coarsely, but... he speaks truth. What of the warriors? What of the Talons?"
Eirik pushed himself off the table and walked slowly around it, stopping directly before the two warriors.
The chamber held its breath.
Eirik moved slowly around the table, the scrape of his boots unnaturally loud in the sudden silence after Olaf’s roar.
He was caught in a vice.
Appoint Olaf, and Leif’s pride would fester into resentment given his noble status. Appoint Leif, and Olaf’s blunt loyalty might devolve into insubordination.
More than loyalty, however, he needed control.
He needed the eventual Master of War to be an extension of his own will, not a competing power center. Someone to generate MF, grind Merit and manage the Talons efficiently. He was, and would remain, the supreme commander.
Leif was disciplined, educated, and more inclined to operate within a rigid system. He would understand the "cage" and likely chafe less within it. He would be far easier to control.
Olaf, all fire and instinct, would be suffocated by it, and a suffocated Olaf was a dangerous thing. Eirik needed a loyal subordinate in that position, a manager, not an independent warlord who might one day challenge the very structure of his command.
But... how would he make him yield... willingly?
He stopped directly before the hulking lieutenant.
"Tell me, Olaf, when you faced the Skarls at the breach, when Grakk'Thor charged, did you need blueprints? Did you need a ledger?"
Olaf’s nostrils flared. "No! I needed steel! Guts! And the will to drive my axe into their skulls!"
"Exactly!" Eirik shifted his intense gaze to Leif. "Leif Fenrir! When the Order templars drew steel to silence me, when Varina prepared her killing spell, did you need an architect’s vision? A scribe’s ledger?"
Leif swallowed.
"I needed my sword, Commander. And the courage to stand."
"Precisely!" Eirik tapped his temple, "This clarity you saw them received? It binds them. It tethers them to this place, to these tasks, in ways you cannot imagine. It is power, yes, but also a chain."
Leif’s gaze dropped for a moment before snapping back up, still defiant, but lacking its earlier fire.
"We just... we deserve recognition, Commander. A place. Not to be forgotten while they... glow."
Eirik stepped away from the table, turning his back deliberately to Olaf and Leif. He walked slowly towards the rough-hewn wall, running his good hand over the cold granite.
"You speak of recognition, Leif," Eirik began. "A place. Fairness. Olaf speaks of blood and guts. You believe the Frost Mother’s clarity – this power given to Yorick, Sindri, Isolde – is a reward. A sign of favor."
He turned back, his gaze sweeping over them both.
"It is not," Eirik stated flatly. "It is a curse."
Confusion flickered across his two lieutenants.
"A curse?"
"Think!" Eirik snapped. "Yorick! What happens if your numbers are wrong? If he miscalculates grain stores? If he fails to see the merchant skimming silver?"
"Starvation. Riots. The fortress crumbles from within, Commander."
"Sindri!" Eirik swung towards the scarred mason. "If your vision fails? If you misjudge the weight the rock can bear? If you forget a single, vital support?"
Sindri lifted his head. "The roof falls. Thousands die."
"Isolde!" Eirik gestured towards her. "One wrong word to Order? One misstep with Flint? One misjudged faction in the realm?"
"We face war on multiple fronts, isolated and alone."
Eirik let the grim reality settle on the room. He walked slowly back towards Olaf and Leif, stopping directly before them.
His gaze locked onto theirs, stripping away pretense.
"That is the clarity they bear. That is the chain the Frost Mother placed upon them. A leash of pure, unrelenting duty. Every heartbeat, they carry the fate of thousands on their shoulders. Their power isn't freedom; it's a cage built of consequence."
He saw the dawning comprehension in Leif’s eyes.
"You envy this, Olaf?" Eirik pressed. "Leif? Do you truly crave this burden? To be trapped in a web of numbers and stress lines and political whispers? To feel the crushing weight of knowing that your thought, your mistake, could kill everyone you fought to save?"
Then, a strange calm settled over him.
"The Military position…" Eirik gestured vaguely towards the space where the Council interface hovered unseen in his mind. "It is the same. Or worse. To see every soldier as a resource, a number to be deployed, a cost to be calculated. To see their lives flicker on some ethereal ledger. To bear the responsibility for every death, every strategic blunder, etched into your soul with this… clarity."
He shook his head.
"That is not command. That is slow damnation. That is a cage that would suffocate the fire that makes you both who you are. The fire that held the breach. The fire that stood against Varina’s ice."
Eirik stepped back. He projected the image of a man making an agonizing, irreversible decision for the greater good.
"I will not do that to you. I will not shackle the warriors of Abercrombie to such a fate. Not to Olaf. Not to Leif. Not to anyone."
He drew himself up, squaring his shoulders.
"The Master of War position… it is flawed. A perversion of what command truly is. It will breed nothing but division, jealousy, and a slow death of the spirit."
He took a deliberate step towards the center of the room.
"I reject it."
He raised his hand, palm open, fingers splayed towards the invisible interface only he could see.
[DESTORY COUNCIL POSITION: MILITARY?]
[WARNING: THIS WILL REMOVE THE POSITION PERMANENTLY. IRREVOCABLE ACTION.]
[CONFIRM: DESTROY MILITARY POSITION? Y/N]
Eirik projected agony.
"It poisons us. It threatens everything we’ve built! This… abomination… must be unmade!"
He paused, lowering his hand slightly, as if gathering his strength for the final blow.
"Forgive me," he whispered. "But for Abercrombie… for the men who bled… for the soul of this place… it must be done."
He raised his hand again, higher this time, trembling with the perceived effort. A faint, illusory shimmer of chilling light seemed to coalesce around his fingers – a trick of the dim lanterns and his own projection of immense power exertion.
"Commander! STOP!"
The roar came from Olaf.
He surged forward, not towards Eirik, but between him and the perceived point of annihilation, throwing his arms wide as if physically blocking an avalanche.
"Don't ye dare! By me mother's frozen teats, don't!" Olaf bellowed. "Ye... ye can't just... smash it t' bits! Frost's balls, Eirik, use yer damn head!"
Olaf turned, his broad back shielding the space where Eirik's hand pointed.
"Leif! Talk sense to this fool! Don't let 'im do this! It's... it's power! Power for the fortress! For all our sorry hides! We don't need no fancy pretty lights! But... but smashin' it? Throwin' it away like yesterday's slops? That's madness, that is!"
Olaf's voice cracked.
"Aye, we pissed and moaned, sure! Like the thick-headed bastards we are! But this? Breakin' what could keep our people breathin'? What could make them better at keepin' us all alive? What could... could maybe save some poor sod's neck out there?" He jabbed a thick finger toward the surface. "Ye'd burn the grain stores 'cause ye can't figure how t' share the bread?! NAY!"
He wheeled back to face Eirik, chest heavin' like a bellows.
"Sod it! If that... that 'clear-sight' helps Yorick fill another belly, helps Sindri keep the roof from crushin' some babe... ye keep the damn thing! Ye use every bloody tool the gods give ye, Commander!"
Eirik let the mask of agonized determination slip only slightly. He kept the tremor in his hand, the strained lines around his eyes, the sheer burden of his supposed decision radiating from him.
"Stop? You tell me to stop, Lieutenant? After what I just heard?" He raised his hand again. "It’s a poison vine! It must be purged!"
"FROST TAKE YOUR PURGING!" Olaf bellowed. "Just give it to the pup! He’s noble-born! Educated! You’ve already been priming him, haven’t you? Threw him against the Skarls at the wall! Let him feel the weight! He probably wants the damn cage! Better him than seeing you shatter something the fort needs!"
Leif met Olaf’s glare, then looked at Eirik. He straightened his shoulders.
"Commander. If... if the position can serve Abercrombie, and you deem me worthy... I am prepared to bear it."
Olaf snorted.
"See? All polite and ready to serve. Perfect cage-bird. Give it to him and be done with this madness! I’m just some gutter trash you pulled out of a troll’s larder, Eirik. I wasn't ever expecting fancy titles or magic headaches. I know the rules! Lords and ladies get the shiny bits! Just... for Frost Mother’s sake, STOP already!"
Eirik slowly lowered his hand.
"Lieutenant Fenrir. Are you certain? Truly? Accepting this... clarity? Seeing your men as numbers on a ledger?"
Leif lifted his chin. "If it makes us stronger, better able to defend the people here... then yes. I accept the burden."
Eirik held his gaze for a long moment, then finally nodded.
"Alright."
Eirik let his shoulders sag slightly, the theatrical strain dissolving from his features. He turned to face Leif directly.
[MILITARY]
[Appoint Councilor?]
[Selected Candidate: Leif Fenrir]
[Aptitude: Great]
[Projected Daily MF Generation: 1,000]
[Realm Advancement: Snow → Frost]
[Confirm? Y/N]
"Lieutenant Leif Fenrir," Eirik's voice carried the weight of ceremony. "Step forward."
Leif stopped three paces from Eirik.
"The Frost Mother's clarity comes to those who serve with distinction," Eirik continued. "You led men against overwhelming Skarl forces. You've proven yourself not just as a warrior, but as a commander."
He raised his hand with deliberate purpose.
"I name you Master of War for Fort Abercrombie."
[Y]
The effect was instantaneous.
"Mother's mercy!" Leif gasped, doubling over as frost spread across his armor in intricate patterns.
[Leif Fenrir Appointed: Master of War]
[Passive MF Generation Active: +1,000 MF/day]
[Realm Ascension Complete: Snow → Frost]
The young noble straightened slowly.
"Commander," Leif's voice came out rough. "I... I see them. Every Talon. From here. I see everyone's... experience... Their equipments. Morale. Aptitude for fighting for every army type... And possible formations. It's..."
"That's the burden," Eirik said quietly. "Get used to it."
Olaf watched the transformation with an unreadable expression.
"Congratulations, pup," he rumbled. "Try not to let all them numbers drive ye mad in a fortnight."
But Eirik wasn't finished.
"Lieutenant Olaf."
"Commander?"
"You spoke of not needing fancy lights or magic to do what needs doing." Eirik moved closer to him. "You're right. You need something else entirely."
Olaf's eyes narrowed suspiciously. "What're ye on about now?"
"Power."
He pulled up the interface only he could see:
[MILITARY MERIT SYSTEM]
[Current Merit Pool: 8,742 MF]
[Transfer Personal MF to Merit Pool?]
[Current Personal MF: 9,200]
[Amount to Transfer: ?]
He locked eyes with Olaf.
"You were the first, Olaf. First to infiltrate the Skarl camp with me. First to drive an axe into their skulls. First to stand when the Order drew steel against your commander."
[Transfer 2,000 MF to Merit Pool]
[Personal MF: 9,200 → 7,200]
[Merit Pool: 8,742 → 10,742]
Olaf's scarred face twisted in confusion. "What're ye—"
"Kneel."
Olaf, who'd never knelt willingly in his life except when forced by Skarl captors, stared at Eirik in shock.
"I don't kneel to—"
"You do. To what you've earned." Eirik interrupted. "Kneel, Lieutenant, and rise as something new."
The room held its breath.
Grudgingly, like a mountain deciding to bow, Olaf lowered himself to one knee.
"This is bloody stupid," he muttered.
Eirik placed his hand on Olaf's shoulder.
[MERIT SYSTEM PROMOTION]
[Promote Lieutenant Olaf to Frost Realm?]
[Cost: 10,000 MF]
[Confirm? Y/N]
"Lieutenant Olaf. For service beyond duty. For loyalty beyond reason. For standing tall when lesser men would flee." Eirik's grip tightened. "Rise, and claim your due."
[Y]
A scream.
Power slammed into Olaf. His muscles seized, expanded, contracted.
"GRAAAAAHHHHH!"
Ice exploded from the point where Olaf's knee touched stone, spreading in jagged patterns across the floor.
"Hold on!" Eirik commanded. "Don't fight it! Let it remake you!"
Then, as suddenly as it had begun, it ceased.
Olaf remained on one knee, breathing in shuddering gasps. Steam rose from his body.
[Lieutenant Olaf Successfully Advanced to Frost Realm]
He pushed himself to his feet, and everyone in the room took an involuntary step back. His eyes had changed. The brown was shot through with veins of pale blue.
"Frost's hairy teats," he breathed.
Eirik swept his gaze across his newly appointed council.
"Right then. That's settled."
He moved toward the heavy door, then paused.
"We'll meet weekly. Same chamber, same time. Each of you will report on your domain's progress. What's working, what isn't, what resources you need. I expect detailed assessments, not platitudes."
"What about me?" Olaf rumbled.
"You?" Eirik turned back slightly. "You do what you've always done. Don't let any title scare you."
Olaf grinned. "Aye, Commander. That I can do."
"Good. Now get out. All of you." Eirik's voice carried finality. "I have matters to attend to that require... solitude."
They filed out, each lost in their own transformations.
Finally alone, Eirik slumped against the stone table.
The performance of the reluctant leader, the burden of command—it was exhausting. But necessary. They'd eaten it up, especially Olaf. The big brute would die before questioning him now.
He pulled up the Settlement interface:
[Settlement Progress: Tutorial Quest #7]
[Time Remaining: 1 day, 11 hours]
[Goals:]
[- Defined Borders - COMPLETE]
[- Habitable Structures - 58.5% Complete]
[- Population 1,000 - COMPLETE]
[- Income Source - 91.3%]
[- Basic Defenses - COMPLETE]
[Current MF: 7,200]
[Daily Generation: 2,500 MF]
The habitable structures needed immediate attention. With his current MF and the daily generation, he could push through the remaining percentage easily. But rushing meant sloppy work, and sloppy work meant dead refugees when a ceiling collapsed.
No. Better to consult Sindri's proposals first, approve the critical infrastructure, then—
BANG! BANG! BANG!
The chamber door shook under desperate pounding.
"Commander! COMMANDER!"
Eirik straightened, irritation flashing across his features. "Enter!"
A Talon guard burst through, his face sheet-white, eyes wild with panic. Snow still clung to his cloak, suggesting he'd sprinted down from the surface.
"Commander! Bad news! Terrible news!" The man gasped for breath, doubling over.
"Breathe, soldier. Report."
The guard straightened, gulping air. "The Frost Mother! She... she BLEEDS, Commander!"
Eirik's blood turned to ice. "What?"
"The statue! Your statue! Blood runs from her eyes! From her hands! Commander! Hot and red and... and it won't stop!"
Bleeds? The ice statue bleeds? A chill ran down Eirik's spine that had nothing to do with the underground cold.
"When did this start?"
"Minutes ago! Maybe five! People started screaming, pointing! The pilgrims are going mad! Some say it's a curse! Others say it's a miracle! They're fighting! The Talons can barely hold them back!"
Eirik was already moving, shoving past the guard and sprinting up the tunnel. His boots slammed against stone, echoing like war drums in the confined space. The guard scrambled to keep pace.
"Who else knows?"
"Everyone in the courtyard! Word's spreading like wildfire! Some pilgrims are trying to collect the blood in bowls! Others are fleeing, saying the Mother's been defiled!"
Fuck. Fuck fuck fuck.
Eirik burst into the main tunnel, nearly colliding with Yorick who was rushing down with his ledger.
"Commander! I was just—"
"Move!" Eirik didn't slow, leaving the confused Master of Coin spinning in his wake.
The tunnel seemed endless. Each step brought new sounds from above—screaming, wailing, the clash of metal. His mind raced through possibilities. Sabotage? Some delayed curse from Varina?
He hit the final ascent at full speed, taking the carved steps three at a time.
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JW Saxby
Excellent 😎 Tftc 🍻
