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Harry Potter: The Mage's Path Chapter 37

🕑 Added 2023-05-17 09:54:27 +0000 UTC

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GamerFiction

I already have a plan for the ICW to get involved later, so I decided against the nonmagical solution. I already mentioned in the story that Amelia has been in contact with the ICW.

Laharl365

Ayo SPECIES CHANGE? hmmmm that could be wild! Seems cool! I'm kinda interested in this abyss/layers-of-hell plotline you're spinning here. Seems kinda weird but also kinda cool? Im torn between just wanting to see Harry and his companions power level, and the actual plotlines you're crafting. I'll need to see more of these bodyguard/hell-mercenaries to get a better feel of their personality. Cool stuff regardless. Thanks for the fun chapter!

Andrew Houghton

Not bad nto bad here is idea why does he not tip off the prime minister that Sirius has not had a trail

Naatra

Honestly forgot he's still only eleven. You've done a good job so far tbh, i just have to remember his age, even though it's difficult at times.

GamerFiction

I'm trying not to make him perfect in every aspect. It's a fine balance to get it right. Even though he is more mature for his age, he is still only eleven. His emotions are going to lead him by the nose on occasion, and he will make mistakes.

Naatra

Harry really needs to learn to think about things before doing them, half of his problems are basically from being impulsive. I know that's very like Harry in canon, but i can hope he actually gets better in this fic about that.


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