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I’m trying clean up the dialogue because I feel like the pacing isn’t right give me your thoughts
🕑 Added 2020-06-27 13:53:29 +0000 UTC
Comments
Fredric Altman
Reads good. I feel like I can actually hear the characters voices. It does feel like a lot of dialogue for one panel tho. Maybe figure out a way to say the same thing more succinctly.
Ga1axygr3g
I feel like it's well paved with nice comical slide ins here and there and it doesn't seem to fast in this panel seems like a regular conversation
