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What Will Be | Chapter 32

🕑 Added 2024-03-05 16:30:02 +0000 UTC

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Christopher Silvestro

Great catch! That one slipped through the gaps.

Nayruke

Was rereading chapter 32 and Lionel says “put him on their radar” I know it’s just a turn of phrase but radars are a modern invention so unless people get skills like mana [radar] I would suggest changing it

Hynao

there are many challenges in this scenario. Is it even possible to teleport the body? it possible to transfer the soul back to earth? If yes what would be the destination? Another newborn? And than there is the question of time. How much time would have passed on earth? But…. it is his goal. Even if it is not really a realistic one it might be the one helping him to progress and keeping him mentally stable. A lot of us have unrealistic goals and dreams. Take me for an example: I play the lottery. The chances are slim but if i would not play lottery at all the chances to win would be even smaller.

Christopher Silvestro

WARNING, SLIGHT SPOILERS AHEAD Explicitly illegal Skills are... unfortunate to the point letting someone exist with them unchecked could be problematic. An extreme example would be if some kid got saddled with Butchering [Human] or something equally dark. As a general rule of thumb, any Skill specialized to work on other people/humans is flagged for a cursory check (in this part of the world) even if common sense would suggest it should be fine, like Massage [Human] or something. Some that are not necessarily illegal but, like, under the 'please report immediately' category are typically social-influence-related Skills. Things like Manipulation [Social] would have fallen under this bracket. These kids are often forcefully conscripted, though to what end I won't quite reveal just yet. In this regard, Bella was similar to Will. Her Skill was on the cusp of being a 'please report' Skill. Instead it is just something desirable, since it lacked an overt influence component, so Hwan was able to keep it on the hush hush.

Hynao

i really want to know what these illegal skills are.. i mean the mother let him advance and choose his own skills and did not tell him:“ by the way if you choose one of these skills you are illegal and have to be jailed,killed or exiled immediately“

Hynao

I hope he will enter something like a junior slayer program so he can stay at home but make signifikant progress at the same time.

Call0013

Hope he helps guide Fudge to some emotional support dog/therapy dog skills, Because he is probably going to need that sort of support threw his life.

Christine Thomas

I seriously doubt he will go back.

cRoMaToR

Yes, that’s why I added the time mage too. I could have understood if he left kids under 4 yo in a very difficult situation (economic and social), but THE love of his life, neaaa, don’t buying it. And yes, it’s been a couple of years and he’s still at denial phase.

The Dude

That whole returning to earth shtick is getting old, this is not the first story to do it. I think most authors clue in that we read to escape from our lives, and wanting to return for a woman who will most likely have moved on. IF he gets back there's no guarantee that it will be at the point of his leaving.

Christopher Silvestro

Good catch. That one was intentional to reiterate that Will is not a horse-guy, so I had him fumble the phrasing in his narration. 😅

The Dude

It's unsaddle not de-saddle

cRoMaToR

Thanks for the chapter. Hope that soon our MC will drop the return back to Earth, becoming the best space/time mage. He took Taming DOG as one of the first two skills, not the best direction if he wanted to go that route.

Pope Yoda I

"This lip and tongue technique will serve him well throughout life." ".... isn't it a bit early to think of that?" "It is NEVER too early to think of that. Besides, you saw how your son looked at Mira. He will undoubtedly grow up to be a Bro."

GODKINGASH

This is not enough


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