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FG: Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2024-04-06 17:55:51 +0000 UTC

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Iron Lung

Absolutely. Marcus is getting a little fed up with all the barriers in his way. Plus, he really needs a shower!

Namel909

End of chapter sss comment … uuuuh kings problem sss , what kind of problem ? sss i would say motivation ! Everyone has a price (even if that price sometimes is hard to pin in form of money). So far marcus prices was self intrest of survival and return home sss , now the king must find a way to repurchase that motivation to overcome these current dark times sss.

Iron Lung

Thanks. All Patreon chaps are first drafts but I will fix this up now that you've pointed it out my good chameleon.

Namel909

nit pick sss at the start of this chapter „was no coorupted“ , i suspect a W went missing sss (you got a few of them all over your chapters but to lazzy to point them all out, but this one was quick spoted and easy to comunicate) sss


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