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(Patreon request) Shikabane (Aggretsuko) Raid Night Splorching
🕑 Added 2023-06-07 12:33:19 +0000 UTC(Comic/Text Ver > Art Only Ver > sound/effects only ver)
Notes:
I was surprised at how little Shikabane appeared in the show, so I had to make some guesses for her personality. While she doesn't care much for what happens to her IRL, but when it affects her gaming, she can become quite stubborn. Something like having some bad sushi on the night a new raid drops, she would rather soil herself than risk her position in the party.
The biggest challenge for this set was the lighting. It is usually quite dark in a net cafe, with the only light coming from the computers. I think I manages to capture the atmosphere without making it too hard to see the "Important bits".
also, I need to work on more skunks, she looks too much like a cat in this in my opinion... perhaps a new OC to practice with might help...
Prolog
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It was a special day for Shikabane. A massive expansion for the game she had been binging was releasing and she was chosen by her guild to lead a raid party. In preparation she had been grinding and pulling all-nighter's, neglecting her health, and biological needs, in the process. She awoke late into the evening due to her stomachs demands for food. Letting out a sigh she checked her phone to see how much money she had left, ¥500, All that grinding, and no work had left her finances in a dire state.
UUuurrrrr~
Her stomach ached once more, and a slight shiver radiated through her now that she was awake, she needed to pee fairly bad. The memories of the night before where hazy but it was clear she had passed out while playing by accident and didn't relive herself in the several hours leading up to doing so. This time she had been lucky her hunger woke her up before she had an accident, again, being kicked out of her current boarding would be a disaster for her raid plans. To avoided wetting herself in the very near future she got up and headed to the restrooms.
PPPPPPIIIISSSSSSSSSSsssssssSSSSSHHHHHHHHhhhhSSSSssshhhh~
A torrent of relief gushed from her just a moment before she had planted herself on the toilet, making a small puddle at her feet and the base of the bowl. She had avoided a major disaster and that was nothing some extra toilet paper could clean up. She tried to go number two while she was there, the need to do so was evident but no matter how hard or much she tried nothing came out. After several days of holding it while gaming must have clogged her up and now all she could do was wait until it decided it was ready. with her bladder emptied and spillage cleaned Shikabane instinctively threw on her jacket began her hunt for food.
When thinking of cheap food, she immediately thought of the nearby FamilyMart, it was late enough something should be discounted, and if it was close to expiry date, even more so.
*DING!*
"Welcome!" The shop keep greeted her with a soulless smile as she entered.
"Umn..." Shikabane grunted in acknowledgement and headed striate to the refrigeration section.
Anything good was out of her budget a single sandwich wouldn't be enough, she focused her search for something filling. her eyes landed on the answer, a bad one, but will have to do. Sushi that was 95% off, why was it so cheap? It officially expires today. But ¥50 per box was perfect for her needs, seven boxes would let her survive until tomorrow and she would have money left over for her concoction at the soda fountain back at the cafe.
the boxed clattered onto the counter as she averted looking directly at the shopkeeper, now being forced into social interaction a bunch of realizations flooded to mind. She had not bathed in several days and had a strong musk, her current residence did not have a shower, her fur was unkempt and tangled, though mostly due to having just woken up. her jacket contained most of her smell but even a slight movement blew the sent into the air.
*Beep Beep Beep*
the cashier was scanning the items as fast as she could, her face still smiling but signs of disgust and discomfort shown through.
*Beep* The cashier looked away and took a deep breath.
"Your total today is ¥350"
"ok" Shikabane reached out with her card and accidentally looked at the cashier's face. The poor workers nose was scrunched up and a single tear rolled down, but her smile remained. With lightning speed, she swiped Shikabane's card and pushed her boxes at her.
"Sorry..." Shikabane said meekly as she left, burying her head in the high collar of her jacket, she gaged at what greeted her. she must have been doing double duty as a skunk, but there was nothing she could do about it right now and with her head heled high and face warm with embarrassment she returned to the cafe.
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Part 1
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Shikabane made quick work of her sushi and logged on for the night.
"O Sup"
The first messages started appearing in the public chat.
"It Bane-Kun :)"
"The GOAT is here :0"
Her guild mates where an active bunch, thankfully that meant she did not have to carry the conversation.
"Hello everyone."
15 minuets until the start time.
Her food had not settled yet so she wanted to distract herself a bit. She browsed her inventory making sure everything was in place for the raid. A wight in her gut persisted, thinking she might need to poop she leaned over and pushed right where she sat to test the waters, but nothing came out. she sat back up.
UUrrrppp~
She managed a small burp but found little relief. She could feel bubbling in her gut, but the need evaded her. this cycle of pushing, burping and discomfort repeated a couple times before guild master pinged everyone.
5 minutes until the start time.
"Alright everyone thanks for showing up!"
"Eh it da Boss!"
"We are going for worlds first! Now I know the devs said this raid is supposed to take 8 hours. So, we are in it for the long haul, this means NO BREAKS!"
"Better get a bucket ready..."
"My protection is already equipped!"
"Now we are forming three groups! I will DM the leaders shortly. NOW GET HYPED!"
Grumble~
Shikabane's stomach was not just bubbling it was tossing and turning, and her through felt stuffy. "I feel sick..." her rear tingled a bit, and her belly was oddly warm. "This discount sushi isn't sitting well..." Her whole body felt uncomfortable, she wiggled and squirmed a bit, her distress only growing.
"The raid opens in 3 minutes!"
"They say it's the biggest one yet."
"I guess we are in for an all-nighter again."
"Shikabane, you lead group B, I'm relying on you."
"Understood."
GGGrrrrroooonnnnn~
Her entire midsection was crying in protest of her latest meal. "But the guild's been hyping this up since this was announced, and I can't let them down." It was time to start the raid, she could only hold it now. She took a sharp breath and clenched as hard as she could, and for the moment her discomfort subsided.
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Part 2
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30 Minutes in
GGGuuuuurrrrUUUUUrrrr~
"I can't focus like this..." Her stomach was hurting much more than before. she was making dumb mistakes due to having to choose between clenching or playing the game.
"Sorry everyone :,( :,( :,("
"Remember your positions everyone."
"Is something wrong Bane-Kun? You seem to be doing less DPS than when we started."
"It's nothing, we go again..."
She had caused a few wipes by letting go of the mouse to plug herself during an important mechanic, or the trimmers causing her aim to go wild.
2 hours and 30 Minutes in
GGGuuUUUrrRRrRrggGGGGlllLLLleeEeE~
Ugh~
"My stomach..." Shikabane's rear exit burned hot, her stomach bloated, and her legs trembled. Her turn to do damage was coming up next, she refused to let go of the mouse again and risk a team wipe.
GGGGGgggggGGgrrRrRRRrrRroOooOoOOowwWwwWlLLLll~
"I..." her tail lifted reflexively, and she raised up bracing herself for a calamity. "Gotta..." her hole pulsated, and a slime coated the space between her cheeks beyond her control.
"Bane-Kun your up next!"
Her turn to do damage arrived and she opted not to keep playing instead of plugging herself once more. her heart skipped a beat as the moment arrived.
BBBBBBBBLLLLLLEEEERRRRRTTTTTCCHHHEEEEHHHHHHRRRRTTT~
Her backside exploded with a torrent of gas and hot slime.
"What are you doing!"
a slick layer of shit spurted out along with the fumes. Her whole body shook from the expulsion.
"Your aim is all over the place!"
"Throwing SMH '\(*-*/`"
"Mabey he sneezed?"
"Aww we wiped again :'("
Shikabane had caused another team wipe, she clenches once more and felt a wet mush as she did so. It burned her hole and with each wave a moist mass spurted and sputtered out into her panties. "Oh no..."
"Someone just ripped ass down the hall LOL"
"Bane-Kun what happened?"
"I can't hold on any longer"
SSPPPLLLLOOOooOORRrrRRRccCccccCchHhhH~
"I'm leaking..." her stomach hurt too much, and her rear burned too hot for her to stop herself anymore. "But my team needs me." she could never drop out mid raid, especially this one. one of the messages caught her attention.
"Wha?" she said to herself in astonishment. "It can't be..."
SPPppLLLooOOorrrPP~
The muck slowed but continued to stretch her panties and part her cheeks as she realized a grim possibility. "S-someone from the group is here too?" the wave finally passed, and she collected herself once more.
"What."
"??????"
"I think I can smell it..."
"We go again..."
"Ok?"
3 hours 30 minutes in
GGGuuuAAAaAaaRRrrrOOoooO~
Her gut fought once more the pain stronger than ever. her painties where alredy caked in shit, and this was the forth wave now. every crevase of her nethers wher filled with so much scat it gushed out the front. the smell was alredy on par with the vile sient inside of her jacket and close to joining her own spray as the worst smell she had ever encounterd.
"Sigh, it doesn't matter." her stomach twinged once more with extreme discomfort. "I'm already filthy, and my stomachs killing me."
HHHhhhhhhaaaaa~
BBBLLOOORRCCCHHHH~
she pushed out another mass of mud that joined with the pile in her panties. "Just keep playing..."
HUUFFFfff~
Shikabane strained as there was little room left for her excrement to go.
PPPLLLOOORRRPPPCCCHHH~
To make room for the continued excretion of muck shit was spilling out of the sides of her panties and slowly slithering down her inner thighs. "And hope no one notices."
4 hours in
PPPLLOOOORRRPPPppp~
the ninth wave hit Shikabane. Her panties where ripped and torn, stretched to their limit, shit flowing out constantly. Having been holding herself up for an extended period of time her legs had given out a few times jettisoning Mud into her holes and out of her paintys whenever she fell onto her rear.
BBBBbbblllLLLloooOOOorrrRRrppPPPPPcccCChHhHH~
her stomach still ached and growned the pain having dulled and become a constant pressure on her gut. she was a mess, but her perserverance was rewarded.
"BOSS DOWN!!!"
"Were halfway there!"
"Only..." Shikabane spoke quietly as she glanced back at the devastation she had caused. "Halfway?" Her stomach ached once more "I'm stuck like this for another 4 hours..." her face grew warmer with embarrassment and realization that she was still not even close to being empty.
"Good job everyone."
"Cool! BRB guys, I have to report this sewage leak."
"H-he's reporting me...."
SSSspppPPPLLlLleEErrRrrcCChhH~
Another lump of shit shot out of her in the sudden panic.
"NO BREAKS! We will be WORLDS FIRST!"
"K... I think I can wait a bit longer."
the wave subsides once more, the weight in her grew, and the bubbling came once more. "I am so screwed..." she murmured.
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Epilog
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Shikabane's team managed to beat the raid and get some good loot, but ironically, they came in second place. Shortly after completing the raid her luck had run out and several reports had been made to the staff about the abhorrent smell. Upon discovery Shikabane received her first franchise wide ban from a cafe, the building was quarantined for 6 months as they tried to remove the smell. Not having any money to pay them back they just let her go and Life on the streets continued as normal for her. It's a good thing Tokyo has so many internet cafes for her to move between.
Unfortunately, she is still searching for a shower, and desperately wants clean panties to were. Not that it matters as long as she can play games and survive.
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Thank you for reading,
Akiko&LostAri~
Comments
Akiko & Lost Ari
thank you so much for your support!
Sakura Ikana
I absolutely love your work!
Frost
It's a shame she was in the show so little...Anyways, this looks great, like you said I think you did the lighting well enough to still portray the Cafe, while keeping it still easy to see the main shot! Skunks are a bit hard to protray right, since they look pretty similar to other animals. I'd try making their tails wider at the end, that's been a simple thing I've seen to help distinguish them better. Their tails are one of the few things to show what animal they are next to the stripe down their back. Will also never deny seeing a new skunk OC!
