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MLP - Concept 1 for the Twilestia comic
🕑 Added 2017-10-19 21:05:13 +0000 UTC Before I officially start with the Twilestia comic, I want to draw some concepts, maybe three or four, and I want to share these concepts to you.This is Twilight after Celestia has given to her bigger breasts. This will be her look. I didn't draw a full body because I'm applying some techniques my teacher has shown me, specifically the eye design and nose design. The scratches with curves on Twilight's shoulders represent the lotion Celestia has put on her student. And I think it would be funny that Celestia would change the color of Twilight's nipples with magic (from pink to brown), although it might not be in the final result, it's just a silly idea.
The little line from Celestia is based on another one from the Overwatch fanfiction called "Oh, Mercy me!" (highly recommended, by the way).
In a few minutes I'll create a poll. One of the patrons suggested a nice title for the comic and I want to know what you think about it. Then I'll work on other drawing.
Love,
RT
Comments
Ok, so Twilight's nipples are going to be pink. Maybe I should include another version with brown nipples, in case if it works or not. About the sides of their faces, I've drawn it this way because of lack of time and space (the drawing of the top was unexpectedly big). If I had had more time, I would have changed the perspective. About Twilight's lips, these are not lips, it's just a scratch I didn't erase. Celestia will still be the only one with defined lips (this detail gives her a milf touch I love) and other characters like Nightmare Rarity (as well as other characters I want to draw for more than a year). But I can understand the misunderstanding. Thanks for the feedback, thanks for your support and I hope you like it! ;) Love, RT
Not a bad start; this comic holds a lot of promise. Now, if you want my opinion, and this is entirely subjective, I prefer pink nipples over brown ones most times, specially regarding white girls. I don't really like the brown nipple look on Twilight. Now, it's your story and you get the last word in these matters, but I'd rather have them pink. Either way I'll read it, so no worries. The new facial designs are interesting. I can't tell if I like them more than the previous ones, but this probably is just a matter of lack of exposure; with time I should have a better defined opinion. Upfront it definitely looks good; when it comes to the sides of her face I think you might need some practice. Then again, I don't remember that many lateral angles on your previous works, so again, it might just be me exposed to something new. Now, you've also added more defined lips to Twilight. I'm not sure what to think of that. Lips on drawings are a delicate subject for me because they can either make or ruin a character for me. You've been cautious here and given her a small amount. I really liked the old design with no lips because, aside from it being attractive, it offered a good contrast between timid Twilight and sex voracious Celestia. Of course, Pinkie was just as kinky and she didn't have very well defined lips either, but it still made Celestia stand out. To make things clear, I don't dislike this change, it's just notorious. Once more, only time will tell whether I enjoy it or not, although I have a good feeling about it so for now I'd keep them. They certainly make your characters look more professional. So, in conclusion, the comic looks pretty promising so far; I'm definitely looking forward to seeing it complete, or even to get the first page. Until then, keep up the great work. I'm curious as to how you'll surprise us next time.
