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MLP - Rarity and Coco as Morrigan and Lilith (pencil sketch)

🕑 Added 2017-10-26 11:10:14 +0000 UTC
MLP - Rarity and Coco as Morrigan and Lilith (pencil sketch)

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I like it, but I actually want two lines, one for each character. To me, less is more. The dialogue would be like this: -The customes you made for Nightmare Night are great, Coco. -Haha, yeah... (she thinks of Rarity's boobs) This is basically the idea of the dialogue, that Coco is a lesbian and Rarity isn't. I think you and other patrons can come up with something better, like a better punchline. That being said, thanks for the suggestion anyway.

I really like the direction you've taken on facial design; it's pretty unique to your style while feeling like something fresh. As a suggestion for dialogue I give you this: -R: So, Coco, what would you like to do on this splendid night? -C: Apple boobing. -R: I believe it's pronounced "bobbing". -C: Yes, that.


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