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C9:-HSDxD_FanFic_Meliodas

🕑 Added 2024-07-31 20:23:19 +0000 UTC

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Morgan Sinn

I don’t know the anime. So it could be why. Just my thoughts on it anyway

Soumen Samanta

Ah, I was trying to recreate the comedic scene from the anime [The greatest Demon Lord is reborn as typical nobody]. Oh well, it didn't seems to have work out. Will keep this in mind. Thanks. 👍

Morgan Sinn

Overall a good chapter. Just something to think about would be at the end of the chapter where his father glares at him? I understand that his father is very much in love with his wife. But he would have to know that his son wouldn’t do anything to her, plus his son was embarrassed that he tried leaving the awkward embrace immediately. It doesn’t take anything away from the chapter, just not the reaction one would expect from a father that knows his son and could clearly see how embarrassed he was.


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