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🎥 Uneven: Part 2 is Here! 🎬

🕑 Added 2025-04-29 12:03:33 +0000 UTC

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erocha75

Finished this second part. The whole thing is a masterpiece, I believe. It is a truly magnificent body-horror story, filled with perversion, obsession, and downright evil. It is so exciting that, in the end, the true protagonist turns out to be Frankie (oh, that blood-curdling moment inside the theater when she says "Finally"). As for feedback, I must also however confess that I do have a couple of observations and issues with the story (which do not detract from its overall greatness, spoilers ahead): 1) Even though I know nothing about the actual business of making a movie, the whole setup provided here feels so real, so authentic. I realize this is (kink+fiction) as well, but given how grounded the whole movie-making environment was presented to us, I find it unrealistic that Frankie and Daisy can easily disregard what happened with Cole without a care in the world. I am no lawyer, but I see no "real" Universe where they do not end up in jail right after the infamous scene (no matter how many airtight NDAs the film crew are forced to sign)... 2) As a direct consequence of the previous point, it would be obviously impossible for Frankie to get bigger (budget + stars) after what happened to Daisy (and Cole); I know we all wanna believe that the baddie goes away scot free, but that is just not believable here... 3) FinalIy: I know it is the whole point of the story, but at the end the excessive assymetry in Daisy was a bit too much for my taste (although I obviously respect the author's choices in this regard)... PS Once again, I wanna thank our author for coming up with this magnificent story. I feel it belongs at some well curated mainstream horror anthology, it is that good...


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