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The Waystation Ch.61

🕑 Added 2023-09-01 05:50:27 +0000 UTC

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Clayton Danvers

Ha! No, nothing like that. I try and avoid that kind of thing. I think in a fantasy setting, you need to keep things more subtle than that. This is s slight spoiler I guess, but remember, we have only actually met Gwen twice. Everything else we know about her comes from a man who was depressed and missing his wife. That kind of thing tends to distort our memories of what a person was actually like in life. Add-in time apart and....

ParoxysmDK

"Inciting incident"? Please don't go the 'his wife cheated with some big shot Fae Lord route', that would be way too predictable. :P

Clayton Danvers

It's a little slower burn than that. The next few chapters feature Bert trying to adjust to this new reality and figure out what has happened. There is an inciting incident further in that leads to a full understanding of what has happened.

Clayton Danvers

Thanks!

ParoxysmDK

Tyftc, not sure how i feel about the ending of this chapter, it felt kind of forced in how quickly his wife turned out to be a major bitch. It almost comes off as fake. I would personally hope to see a POV shift to Gwen next chapter, just to see her line of thought and reaction to this chapters argument; and if it turns out she actually is this kind of bitch, then technically Bert is still married to her, so maybe he should get that fixed with a divorce :P.

David Zimmerle

Glad he’s finally moving on from that bitch


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