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[WIP] Parental Rehearsal [Page 38]
🕑 Added 2023-06-09 20:24:49 +0000 UTCAnd another wip, hope you'll like it!
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Comments
Now THEY might like this outcome and have their little bunny back.
Not the best turn of events for him!
Thanks a lot to you two for the corrections!
I wonder what Judy's parents think of this
CreamyCookie Princess
Yeah that's fair ๐
Ngl, feel kind of bad for Nick. Judy is cute and all but Nick is breaking his back and dignity for her. Heโs indulging her interests but heโs sounding miserable. Like he lost his partner and got a big baby instead. Caregivers need love and affection to.
CreamyCookie Princess
Judy is so kawaii here ๐๐๐๐
More and more Judy is becoming an ABDL! ๐
Ricardo de Cervantes
I would say "And she often wanted to continue this weird roleplay. ..." Fits better.
Besides the other correction I'd throw "she'd often want to continue these weird roleplays" and maybe "rearrange" works better than arrange
Thanks a lot Blake!
Haha, a real superstar
This turn of events is the best thing that could happen to Judy to continue her life as an adult baby.
Blake Wall
If you interested in a grammar correction it should be "She didn't even leave one shooting opportunity pending" if that helps
