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(TW/robot gore) "Playing Rough" Pages 5-6 WIPS

🕑 Added 2026-02-01 02:32:24 +0000 UTC

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DG254

This is actually really wholesome omg! x//D Seeing this more calm side of Springtrap is very charming and cute~!

Mr. Agent X

Considering the previous scene, in which Springtrap ripped off Foxy's arm while mercilessly fucking him, I wasn't expecting to see him repairing the damage caused to both of them during that rough play, ahahaha. Still, I really liked the dynamic you created between them, with Springtrap taking on the role of the rough boss, but at the same time tolerant and playful (𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘢𝘺𝘣𝘦 𝘪𝘵'𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘱𝘰𝘴𝘵-𝘯𝘶𝘵 𝘤𝘭𝘢𝘳𝘪𝘵𝘺, 𝘭𝘮𝘢𝘰), and Foxy being... well, Foxy. Another aspect I loved was the fact that you used the work Springtrap design you created a while back, highlighting his mechanical and engineering skills. Honestly, I cannot wait to see how this will look after you add color and shadows. As for the panels themselves, what else can I say? I was delighted with the way you illustrated the characters' expressions and even the backgrounds on page 5 (𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘶𝘨𝘩 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺'𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘪𝘳 𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘭𝘺 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘨𝘦𝘴). Plus, do I even need to comment on how hilarious (𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯 𝘴𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘺) Springtrap's interaction was after Foxy simply used his claws to make a new wound on the rabbit's belly? Seriously, I loved it a lot! In conclusion, you did a wonderful job here, KiddieJay!! Can't wait to see how this page will look once it's finished. Until then, never stop doing what you love and keep being yourself >3c 🌟✨

PinkiesCupcake

Really nice to see them get more deep personalities, especially that Springtrap as the boss is NOT the typical grouchy asshole who hates everyone for no reason. Was a really fun read :D