Chapter 8, Pages 2 & 3
🕑 Added 2023-10-18 19:40:38 +0000 UTCThe next 11 pages are gonna be a lot of fun, as we get a short tour around Val's mind. Her story will be told in first person through her journal entries (Val would never have a diary). ;)
You've seen page 3 before. I did a few touch ups here, but I am planning to redo it at a later date because it doesn't play the way I'd hoped it would. In the meantime, I'm gonna be working on pages 4 & 5 at the same time to see if that helps my workflow.
Alright! I'm gonna go and finish packing up mail club. Should be ready to go out tomorrow! Have a great evening, everyone!
Comments
Talasha
And teams up with her kinky-brain.
Stereoscope Comics
Awesome! Thanks so much for helping me get the book printed! :D
Stereoscope Comics
Ah yes! And the places her brain shall go!
Stereoscope Comics
Awesome! Thanks so much for helping the campaign! Enjoy!
AThrowawayJoke
Got my book today! Flipped through it and landed in the bonus comics in the back and got a good laugh out of the sub seniority joke!
kou32
hehehe, glad to see Val is having fun Her DM brain is taking over XD
Dan
My book arrived today! Looks awesome! And the stickers are cute... thank you!
Stereoscope Comics
Excellent! Thanks for the correction! Excited to share the next few pages!
Canti
Even if I knew how to do that, I wouldn’t admit it, lol. I do some writing too, so I like to read between the lines
Stereoscope Comics
My army of editors strike again! Thanks for spotting that! 👍
Stereoscope Comics
Dude, did you hack my computer and read my notes?!🤣 Will be interested to hear your thoughts on upcoming pages. Gonna be fun!
Michael Kehoe
But I can't wait I want it now lmao. Seriously though great job
Stereoscope Comics
Thanks! So happy to be working on the book again! More pages on the way!🎉
Stereoscope Comics
Thanks! 😜
Stereoscope Comics
Great idea! Yeah, I think she deserves a proper print. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
Awesome! I hope you enjoy all the goodies (and the book, too)!
Stereoscope Comics
I believe you are correct. Thanks!
Stereoscope Comics
Thanks for the save!👍
Stereoscope Comics
Thanks! That I can fix!🎸🎶
Stereoscope Comics
Oh, just wait! We’ve got some fun ones coming! 🥳
the_iceman
This rope is a handy holding aid. ;)
char-dawg
They're not HARD to find. ;)
DoItYourself251
I want to see Val with the purple rope and black leather now. I also want some purple rope.
Notebook
Very nice work
Nchalada
Love the changes, nice and subtle
Canti
I like that “the new her is good at lying” when her mental image is of Ellie and the girl in question is in fact a terrible liar and nowhere near that composed. The contrast makes it funny
Villager
Wow! Great story line direction. Look forward to what comes next.
Michael Kehoe
OK those are almost my favorite pages so far
Kalia Grey
My Black Box arrived yesterday! It's beautiful!!
Mei Mei
I see that DM kind of brain.
Death of Ink
Val's got quite the imagination on her, and it's so cute and dorky! I'm glad we've finally reached her POV!
Ozz
My Black Box arrived woooo!! No 166 :D
Ajax
You are missing a word in the dialogue box, bottom left corner. "They are not X to find. The city breeds them."
Brad Kitts
Think you missed a word on the second page "They're not (hard) to find, the city breeds them." Other than that, looks exciting.
Fritz Sands
"not hard to find", I believe.
smack54
You left out a word on page 3 bottom text bubble.
SwanSong1620
Looking great, always happy to see Val content. However, minor mistake on pg 3 - 'they are not to find'