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Chapter 8, Page 41 (Updated)

🕑 Added 2024-07-11 03:43:56 +0000 UTC

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Shrub Jump

Ellie's mind: "(TI__LT)" :D

Katt Wallingford

Ahh, that's MUCH better. 😁

Stereoscope Comics

Fixed! Thanks for the save! :)

Amber7

I suppose you can argue it both ways, but I'm gonna suggest that - in the reader's frame of reference - not enough time has elapsed to properly justify this kind of callback. It's gonna take them around a minute to go from page 35 to page 41, and we've already clearly established that Ellie knows more than she's letting on. Thinking about the translation, I'll probably want to replace this with something like "Well, at least you know what it's for..."/"...that's a start." or somesuch. I've always been told to avoid repetition whenever possible. Gah; morning coffee strikes again; feel free to ignore me. ^_^'

Stereoscope Comics

Interesting. I was hoping the callback/siting of Ellie’s forbidden knowledge would work for a laugh. It still works in my head, but I am looking at it with a bit more scrutiny. Also, thanks for using the word ‘penultimate’ correctly. :)

Bruce Burding

Dear Ellie, my pet,.....I have so many toys for you to enjoy, it will be excited more from being restrained

Amber7

I wonder if the penultimate panel is even necessary. In narrative terms it's almost an exact copy of the final panel from page 35 (down to the same wording used). It strikes me as being somewhat redundant. This would still be a perfectly cromulent scene if it just... wasn't there. Also, by now I'm running out of synonyms for "naughty" (which, regrettably, shares its word pool with "bad" in this weird language of mine). Not really a problem per se, just an odd little tidbit (I always get chatty after my first cup of joe 😝). PS. The l's in "IT'll" (2nd panel; bottom bubble) are in lowercase; that's a typo.

Katt Wallingford

*helping*

Tendra Hinman

Gods, all of these recent pages have been so good. Not only are we getting a lot of great scenes and some lovely shots of the characters, but the general writing is so phenomenal. Seriously, keep up the amazing work.

Stereoscope Comics

All the pages are up but the numbers got mixed up a while back as I moved part of Val’s scene messing up the page order. I’ve been meaning to go in and fix that. Sorry for the confusion.

Stereoscope Comics

Ah-ha! I see what you mean. I think I know how to fix that. Thanks!👍

Death of Ink

Ellie's getting a *tad* hot under the collar over this eventuality. 🤭

Casey

Can you link to 37? the only ones I see are 30-35, and now 38-41. :(

Hurog

37, 39, and 40 are up, but I'm not seeing 36...

Katt Wallingford

The blush over the bottom of her face in the last two panels seems... off. Looks too much like a mask. Also not sure if one can blush that close to lips. I dunno. I'm not really an artist, so I can't really provide the most technically informed feedback. It just seems weird to me. 😕