Page 52 Update
🕑 Added 2024-10-16 01:32:27 +0000 UTCI was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update t
I was struggling to get the pacing and panel count to work on the next page, when it suddenly ocurred to me that, since I needed to update the text in panel 5 anyway, I could basically move the first panel of page 53 back to 52. Tightens everything up nicely and I think adds a lot to this page as well.
Alright! I'm back to work on page 53 and 54! Can't wait to share!
Comments
Stereoscope Comics
Hell yeah!
Ethan
Is this a “drop it you loose” kinda game?
Bruce Burding
Last panel definitely makes it more intriguing 🤔
George
"GAH!" We hear ya, Ellie. We hear ya.
Amber7
This shtick works better with a flogger, but I guess a crop is easier to bite down on - and she's already ruined it, so no big loss there... ;)
Gorastet
It's the same.
Katt Wallingford
Was Ellie biting her lip in the next to last panel originally? That's either new, or I missed it the first time.
kou32
hehehe, poke the dom and see what happens XD
engagecrayfish0
she’s like ok now I find it cute bite it again 😂
Ian Price
oooo yes this pacing is good.
Death of Ink
Oh now this is WAY better!
Fritz Sands
Oh, that is delightful!
Michael Kehoe
Oh my that is soon much better. Definitely shows a little more attitude adjustment hehe
Brad Kitts
Meg ain't about to let Ellie win.
Cheshire Noir
Such a brat! :-D