[MDWY] Ch. 38 "The Way You Make Me Feel" - Pt. 02
🕑 Added 2021-06-22 02:01:28 +0000 UTCNow we have a look at Xiulan's perspective. I teased some of it before, but never gave her this much spotlight heh. You can expect more of her POV!
Comments
Zen (Marty)
Must. Not. Spontaneously. Nibble. On. The. Nape. Of. Her. Neck!
Nicolas
We all got a neck thing dont we
Sarah B
Even zooted I can tell how adorable they are together
Exo
Hehe exactly! I'm glad you think so as well! Aren't they adorable? Yes! I want readers to know that Xiulan can still get flustered even if she may not look like it. And it's one reason why I like slow burns so much even if this one might be arguably, a bit faster than usual (or is it?). Just like in real life, sometimes there's one thing that your crush does that makes your heart flutter; I'm just happy it worked in this instance!
Exo
YES!! That's what I was going for hehe, I wanted to show another side of Xiulan and I'm glad it was conveyed well enough in these few pages! I couldn't agree more, the contrast between the usual Xiulan and this flustered one is so delicious so I'm happy you're enjoying it as well c: thank you!
Jackie Horn
Omg I love seeing the other side of the crush! It's so sweet and adorable knowing that Xiulan is just as bashful and into Suyin as Suyin is into Xiulan. Xiulan is usually so cool and smooth and collected, and there's an intimidation factor in that, in having a beautiful woman's focus solely on oneself. So I love that we get to see Xiulan absolutely losing her shit silently over Suyin!
Jayne Lindgren
It's so cute seeing her get worked up like this! And it's great to see how Suyin makes her feel. It's easy to get one-sided when we get tons of Suyin being bashful at her crush, so it's super sweet to see that Xiulan is dealing with the same thing. <3