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96. The Beginning of a Beautiful Friendship

🕑 Added 2022-08-15 07:00:04 +0000 UTC

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James Nagy

bruh you need to go touch grass. He does not think he is eleanors dad. he is her friend and stopped her from using a potion she didn't know was harmful or good. sure he lies but nothing I have seen shows he thinks he is better then anyone.

GuyWhoReadsALot

He thinks he's Eleanor's Daddy, and makes decisions for her, destroys her work without even trying to find out what it was about. Sounds evil to me. He also lies a lot, showing his dishonesty. He thinks he knows better than everyone and is happy to lie to get his way.

GuyWhoReadsALot

Thinking the main character is an unethical piece of crap doesn't mean I hate the story. The rise of a supervillain is an interesting plot line. But I've recently noticed the story isn't progressing at all. I don't hate it, but I am almost done with it.

Louis Cypher

Are you really paying 10$ to endlessly complain about a story you hate,lol? That’s kind of sad.

Notcreepycreeper

H- he has vices! And like might con someone out of a couple hundred bucks😥

Leander

How the hell is he supposed to be evil?

GuyWhoReadsALot

Starting to wonder if this story is going anywhere. Essentially nothing has happened since he started school. He has made two friends, done a couple of things to show how evil he is, and other than that... Nothing. We going anywhere? Or is it going to be 50 more chapters of no real progression?


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