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75. Starlight

🕑 Added 2022-08-04 19:00:05 +0000 UTC

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BubblyGhost

Martel is very childlike and a bit of an idiot savant as has been established at this point in the story.

Leander

I have one problem with the story: Martel doesn‘t show a lot of agency, he get‘s swept along with the plot instead of being the driving force behind his decisions. He remarks an interesting tidbit but then just forgets it. That is a bit irritating.

Quill

Thanks. :) We'll have to go to the regular schedule soon, but I can keep it up a few more days.

Beeees!

I'm amazed at how quickly you are pumping these out, keep up the great work!

GuyWhoReadsALot

Martel seems slow... Just not even curious about how he felt stronger under the stars many chapters back, and how the ancient ones got their magic from stars... Should be able to make that connection much faster. At least enough to be curious about it.

Hajakuja

Ahh so Eleanor stole the ingredients to make the potion and use it for her sister, didn’t she?


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