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INTEMPERANCE VII - Chapter 24, Never Say Never
🕑 Added 2024-01-18 04:03:30 +0000 UTCAnd so the final chapter of Book VII is posted. Not much of a cliffhanger this time, only a little one. Book VIII will begin shortly, so please stay with me. As always, let me know how I did and how I'm doing. I know I say this after every book, but I really think that VIII will be the final novel in the main story.
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Greg Coleman
I wonder how Michelle’s life went later. Maybe this is her (story happened in Roseville, CA): https://www.nbcnews.com/news/us-news/woman-arrested-police-found-2500-stanley-cups-car-rcna134995
Adam Driscoll
There's nothing like a show from the stage perspective. You've nailed this one, Al. I particularly liked the return of the 'good catholic girl' and her less-than-introspective introspection. The stage perspective seemed dead-on, too. Thanks for another killer chapter.
Alle Joeng
Great chapter, as usual. I’m anxiously waiting for book8. Sidenote: I think there’s a small typo on p5: “The band Intemperance and Jake Kingsley himself went *again* everything she believed in.” - shouldn’t it be “against”?
