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INTEMPERANCE VIII - Chapter 5, What Was Your Name?
🕑 Added 2024-04-20 02:29:15 +0000 UTCSorry it took so long to get this one out. In addition to dealing with some personal issues of real life, I just found this chapter a hard one to get started, a bit of writer's block cramping my brain. Finally, I got my shit in gear and got to work. And then I found it required a lot of pouring through early editions of the story to make sure I had details right. Anyway, here it is. As always, let me know how I'm doing. This episode could have been called "Closure" but I went with the title above in relation to a conversation involved within.
Comments
Jack Andrews
This chapter was pure magic. I got chills at the record signing, and my mouth literally dropped opened. The second surprise upped the ante. This is just one reason why you're an amazing storyteller. These characters are my friends. I've "known" them for 20+ years. To see some of them again, so many years later, is what happens in real life. You ask how you're doing. You are kicking ass.
Al Steiner
Trying to give some closure to earlier characters. I'm happy with where I went with Angie. Helen actually developed into a late edition minor character, much to my own surprise. I did not plan that in advance. It just kind of flowed out of me.
Adam Driscoll
That was an interesting-but-weird chapter. Ex's crawling out of the woodwork (thank you for the Angie cameo. Like Jake, I've wondered about her.) Matt getting woke up early is hilarious. Couldn't happen to a better guy, lol.
Al Steiner
Thank you!
Peter Kelly
I am happy with this chapter
