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Rewrite of Intemp IX chapter 17
🕑 Added 2025-06-23 13:43:31 +0000 UTCNo charge for this as it's just an update to a chapter that has already been published. I'm going through the final edit of Book IX for publication and checking back on all the comments of each chapter as I go--my usual procedure. I noted several people though I should have put Caydee's first time hearing Pa-Ho say her name and I realized they were right. And so, in Chapter 17, during the Judge Olson scandal, I put in two additional scenes after the first scene of the chapter. Thank you to those who insisted that be there.
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Al Steiner
It's in there somewhere. She asked him how many pills he needed to take in order to have sex.
wulf losee
Which chapter did Tif shoot down Matt? I'm rereading the novel from the start right now, and I thought it was early in the book, but I haven't come across the scene. Or was it way back in Intemp VIII?
Dan Schlangen
Lovely scene.
