INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 3, Mi Casa is My Castle
🕑 Added 2025-03-25 14:21:30 +0000 UTCBear with me for another chapter as new characters are introduced once again (not REALLY new). This is another view of the Kingsley family from an outside perspective. This is all leading somewhere. The characters introduced in the last two chapters will be recurring in this final primary story novel and will feature in any next generation novels that may follow. As always, let me know how I'm doing.
Comments
Adam Driscoll
Ahh Jake, be content with your talents dude. Leave the acting to the professionals. lol. This was a good building block chapter, Al. Good new characters, good use of pacing & backstory. Just solid all the way through.
Al Steiner
Book 1 was already updated to that scene being 18+ back when I first published the book on Amazon, so it's safe. Some of my others stories had to go, Aftermath chief among them, Becky, Doing it All Over. Such is life. There's nothing I can do about it so I'm not going to stress about it.
Jamie
Al, have you seen the craziness on SOL? I think for only a problem for the first book of Intemperance for Jake and his first groupie.