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INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 4, Practicing to Deceive
🕑 Added 2025-03-31 09:23:15 +0000 UTCI am very happy with this chapter as the prose flew out of me quite easily in a way it has not done in a while. I think everyone will like this chapter and agree that the story is moving along. I would like to thank my anonymous friend who helped me with the Spanish parts over the last few chapters. She has been invaluable, and I think her contribution makes the dialogue sing. As always, let me know what you think. Many of the plot turns in the series have come from reader suggestions (the entire Greg arc, for instance).
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EdM1950
So Cap's first correctly articulated word is Shit. That's gonna liven up Sunday dinners.
Al Steiner
He's just being Greg. He can't help himself.
Al Steiner
I agree. I had a blast writing that one. It was fun to drop back into Greg's mind for a bit too.
Russ Wideman
that was a fun chapter!
Adam Driscoll
Damnit Greg, act like a human!
