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INTEMPERANCE IX - Chapter 6, You Can't Always Get What You Want
🕑 Added 2025-04-14 00:55:00 +0000 UTCSome more character development in this one. There's a good helping of Caydee and an introduction to the new KVA Receptionist (God be with her). Keep the comments and suggestions coming.
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Rob Law
Mea Culpa - I had lost faith. Why another Book, a wrap-up chapter and on to the next project (Elon, the first man on Mars…and then they left him there.) but there were glimmers; fresh characters, the return of others, and all of those freakin’ teaser illustrations - some a dozen years or so into the future. “Hey man, it’s cool, the first one’s free.” And that’s how they pull you back in. A thoroughly enjoyable chapter. Spring is sprung. Life is beautiful. And then you introduce, ‘The Macready’ Awesome.
Al Steiner
Yes. A little cross universe humor. Barb is Martian before her time. And it's funny in either universe. That's why it's such a great line.
Eric
A great chapter. Can't wait to see more from Barb. This line: "‘chill your shit out and tell me what’s got your butt plug too far up your ass..." has to be an homage to the same line in "A Perfect World," right???
