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🕑 Added 2023-08-14 05:39:50 +0000 UTC

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I really like how you start your stories with the initial shock/embarrassment of suddenly becoming a baby. I would like if you went more into this aspect of things rather than your characters eventually mentally regressing personally. For example your first chapter of world wide rewind of both iterations is great when your character is unwilling to be a baby and is shocked at what is going on. If you’re willing to do a commission I’d be willing to pay!

Thanks I really liked the way crystal are dangerous came out felt fresh compared to some of the other stuff I've done at least to the point it had a good build up and I really need to go back and reread Tim's Genie Encounter part of the reason I haven't gotten back on that yet feel like I've forgotten some plot points and need a refresher lol.

Cubsguy108

I love the new one, crystals are dangerous. It’s a great setup! I will say I’ve also been eagerly awaiting a new chapter of Tim’a Genie Encounter- I am super eager to read how that one will turn out!


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