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Doomsday preppers 9

🕑 Added 2024-10-15 21:53:36 +0000 UTC

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Risser

that was excellent and i thought he did have hygine products. ill have to go back and read. as for italics and bold. i thinks its better without them unless used in conversation where someone yells a word that wouldnt normally be stressed. english already has an ebb and flow to it usually added exciters arent needed beyond a ! every now and then.

Deathknight134

Man, can't wait for Akira to dick down Taiga, kek. ESPECIALLY if that's Taiga Fujimura from Fate like I think it is! Underrated girl that one, doesn't get enough love. Man, I hope they capture Ichirou Shido and torture him if not just outright kill him. He's too much of a danger with his hentai powers! Also, damn...Rip those poor Police Girls. I hope Koichi and his men die agonizing deaths. SEDUCE THE MOB BOSS TIGER! :p

Deathknight134

"His coming, I know it." --> "He's coming, I know it." "Shizuka said as looked her friend in the eye" --> "Shizuka said as she looked at her friend in the eye" "His coming, I can feel it." --> "He's coming, I can feel it." "Shizuka chuckled as the walked out of the room." --> "Shizuka chuckled as they walked out of the room." "Akira causally walked in." --> "Akira casually walked on." "Hey hey people seeth here-" (I don't know how to correct this or if its intentional or its a joke.) "It's been hectic day" --> "It's been a hectic day" "with only a half a building available" --> "with only a half of the buildings available" / "with only a half of the building available" "with a roaring tiger emblem at the jacket." --> "with a roaring tiger emblemon the jacket." "the sight of hundreds of people and JSDF pointing their guns at her." --> "the sight of hundreds of people and the JSDF pointing their guns at her." "He had made sure to Tax living shit out of that foreigner." --> "He had made sure to tax the living shit out of that foreigner." "It didn't make sense to Ichirou so he left alone." --> "It didn't make sense to Ichirou so he left it alone." "to have a lot of children thag belong to some VIPs.” --> "to have a lot of children that belong to some VIPs." "The you leave us no choice-" --> "Then you leave us no choice" "to be the one sleeping in jail cell!" --> "to be the one sleeping in a jail cell!" "Never in a million years did think that moment" --> "Never in a million years did he think that moment"


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