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Strangers On Paper - DevLog #13

🕑 Added 2023-05-24 17:10:02 +0000 UTC
Strangers On Paper - DevLog #13

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wibble

I agree with a lot that's been said. I really felt the writing was well above average. The characters feel grounded and realistic. Amy is simply adorable and I want to rescue her. Becca's tale is interesting too. I really like how it feels like there are two distinctly different paths shaping up and I'm keep to explore both. And I felt like the renders were great as well. I'm here for the emotions and the story, not the porn. Well done. And please, do pace yourselves. Game development is a marathon, not a sprint. Seen too many new devs get caught up in the excitement and hit the wall down the road. Work life balance is critical for your longevity as devs. Given you both have clear talent, I want to see you guys stick around for the long haul.

Bobo Bobo

It was a great first chapter, and you really deserve all the positive feedback. The girls look great. They look like themselves but with some subtle changes – Amy perhaps with a little more confidence, and Becca somewhat vulnerable even with her guard up.


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