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Chapter 162 Getting Things Ready

🕑 Added 2022-02-17 21:33:22 +0000 UTC

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Baba Vader

I've felt that as well, especially with this part. It's my first work, after all, there are bound to be issues. I'll try to get away from it, if not in the new chapters, hopefully in the rewrite. That said, I found Primal Hunter to be rather boring post tutorial. To each their own, I suppose.

Lommel

You know, the story too often reads like a dry project management and TODO list. Negative example that has a similar issue: "Jake's Magical Market" in the later parts. Positive example: The Primal Hunter, where even the grinding parts feel fresh. I don't write because I have no idea how to do it well, but I can criticize like the best of them...

Fabio Murtas

Thanks for the chapter


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