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Chapter 200 Party

🕑 Added 2022-05-08 14:19:47 +0000 UTC

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Baba Vader

Stormbringer is a little annoying. Everyone wants to know more and he comes by often enough that it could happen but he's just too far out of Fio's league. I might adjust him in the rewrite to only come by once a year...

David Brims

Good chapter! Particularly liked the to-the-point speech by Roguk and the interplay between Alex and Fio. The bit with Stormbringer was shorter than I was expecting (I was expecting a whole chapter), but on the other hand I had already thought Fio was still too weak to successfully approach the dragon, so no reason to draw it out if she can't. Interesting thing with the air creation. Can't think of anything else important that needs to be done before a time-skip. 😊


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