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Vol. 3 Chapter 43: A New Associate & Some PR (Part 1)

🕑 Added 2023-03-14 12:23:27 +0000 UTC

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Jonathan Wint

Hope she recruits Alzen as a Trainer or second guard. He be easy to underestimate and Loyalty a thing better than a Arm. and one-armed Swords men are Fucking Awsome!

Mitzee

Sorry to critique without offering any actual suggestions. At the end of the day it's a nitpick.

Mitzee

I've felt that some of the references to jobs in her past life have been a little jarring. I think it might be because the amount of details in one paragraph make it a sort of mini exposition dump.


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