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i will line edit your writing (thesis paper / think piece / artist statement)
🕑 Added 2022-11-18 16:55:40 +0000 UTCNoticed a bunch of people who reached out about doing a studio visit were ultimately looking for a close read on their writing, so.....
Bump up to the $50 tier this month if you want me to line edit + give overall feedback on your artist statement, think piece, or thesis paper
This is an irresponsibly underpriced offer compared to the cost of getting a line edit via a college class lol
Here's what I look to develop in an edit:
-a BOLD thesis statement. The first paragraph should immediately pique the reader's interest while establishing your intentions for what comes next
-CLARITY in every part of the writing. No nonsense, no wordiness, no repetition. Writing is meant to be enjoyed and understood by the reader, not bore them into submission
-overall CONSISTENCY. What are the core insights of this writing and how do they relate back to the thesis? Does the analysis make sense? Does the writing build to a clear conclusion?
bump up a tier, send me an email at bradtroemel@gmail.com with your writing attached and i'll get back to you ASAP
Comments
kasia
we <3 u brad !
Brad Troemel
Not sure might be out of my league send it and Iβll let ya know
Elliot
Hey Brad, would this apply to likeβ¦well Iβll just say my own shit, which is a doctoral application writing sample in political theory/philosophy.
