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🕑 Added 2024-04-18 06:27:41 +0000 UTC

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Abaddon Lucifer

Admin is ok, but i read so many stories with the ROB plot that i am tired.

Matemeo

Overlord and FGO were why I joined, but I wasn't too interested in the DxD. I plan on skipping DxD and throwing my hopes into Admin.

Sir Pucklebottom

It's hard to branch out from what your audience is used to. Personally, I think smaller original projects would be a good introduction to your style and ideas. Sprinkle in short stories in between the projects that your audience is mainly interested in. I've read So It Is Done, Overlord DxD, and Overlord FGO, and all of them are pretty good, so I'm hopeful about the Admin project.

Sean Thacker

Also, I'm staying on this train, whether Admin goes forward or something else does.

Sean Thacker

I joined for FGO and DxD, but Admin looks good, conceptually, at least. Of course, I think a better focus on player POV makes a lot of sense. And I think Zero would get better and better at accommodating and creating the game, meaning the players' POV would be even better. However, I don't know if I'd prefer it over something else lined up. I'd have to be informed via a chapter of whatever it is to know for sure.

clagann

I agree with this guy I’ll definitely look forward to more admin

Burkes

I also joined for overlord. Before you read this, i’m not shitting on it as it genuinely looks interesting, these are just things I’m looking at and going “nah no way is this gonna fly”. Admin looks cool but even with his “limiter” still on he’s kind of… dumb. Missing way too many steps. You should employ some kind of time dilation effect due to accelerated thinking or something as right now he’s literally just a dude who knows shit about making a game using the ai to do everything. Right now it looks like when someone mentions something he’s like “oh shit i forgor, better add that later”. In my honest opinion this story should be told primarily from the pov of players and other people. Few people would be as interested in the development of a game rather than playing said game. As it stands now it just him blitzing to create literally anything and fix shit he forgot to do, and i don’t see it changing at all for a while since he literally had a week to cobble something together. If what is shown from the players perspective just from character creation alone, i’d probably drop the game for a while irl. I get my guy is working with not even the bare bones of something, but short, infrequent time skips would be to your favour here. He should theoretically be able to accomplish quite a lot in a week since he’s “the world’s most powerful AI”. All in all it looked interesting, probably take a bit longer editing the chapters even if it delays updates by a day or two (quality rarely loses to quantity). Regardless of whether this comment is taken seriously or not, I’ll be following this story and withhold my judgement on it until its got a bit more depth to it.

Jose Cruz

I joined because of overlord, and stayed because of the writing. The admin project seems like fun.


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